Reviews for Hungers
jk chapter 2 . 5/18
bella wearing a skirt that ends in beads? a shirt that ALSO has beads? What is the rest made out of ...buckskin? bellas a fucking indian!

She would never wear such ugly clothes...just saying
AstrologyQueen chapter 3 . 9/25/2015
you are also implying that brown eyes do not have as much appeal as blue or green eyes
AstrologyQueen chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
Bellas eyes are not blue-green they're brown
LadyGwenhwyfar chapter 3 . 1/16/2012
Hmm. Just reread this. I suppose my writing wasn't bad for a 16-year-old. And I think my Bella has more character than Stephenie Meyer's.

This is my account, but I lost the password to this account a long time ago, so you guys can take it off your alert lists.

CullensTwiMistress chapter 3 . 10/29/2010
this was hot, I want more!
Charlotte Miles chapter 3 . 1/5/2010
That was good.I hope you write more soon!
cold meadow chapter 2 . 1/4/2010
Um . . . In this chapter you wrote that Bella had Bue-Green eyes.

She has brown . . .
team-hybrid8 chapter 3 . 10/12/2009
GypchiEndeavors chapter 3 . 7/18/2009
Brilliantly sexy enough- poor Edward! More!
MaeCullen17 chapter 3 . 6/23/2009
Great story! Keep it up!:)
cheku chapter 3 . 6/22/2009
OME! i loved that please wright more!

your friend

pooshy-spoon chapter 3 . 6/20/2009
Make them screw already! God! Hury Up! This, I gotta read.
MismatchedButtons chapter 3 . 5/7/2009
this is great!


so interesting...hehe.
ShiyoPanthera chapter 3 . 4/5/2009
Sorry, i just sent a review about Bellas eyes and then i read the top of this page lol. so sorry again. Bella would look pretty with blue-green eyes though. This story is funny. I was not expecting the whole moaning thing LOL. if edward could have blushed, he prolly would have!
ShiyoPanthera chapter 2 . 4/5/2009
I just thought id let you know that Bella's eyes are a deep brown. Im not sure if youve gotten many reviews on that, but hopefully this review will help. But so far, this story is pretty funny. and yes, teasing Edward is fun lol.
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