|Reviews for Total Knockout|
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/14/2014
| artemisgirl chapter 7 . 7/3/2014
I laughed SO HARD at this story! What a brilliant idea! I loved it ! xD
| SplendentGoddess chapter 7 . 6/19/2014
LOL, this was cute.
| Michelle18 chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
You're absolutely hysterical! I'm a huge fan! The way you describe Inuyasha's thought process never gets old!
| MisplacedWit chapter 7 . 3/20/2010
The Pride and Prejudice parts almost made me laugh more than the actual story. The Lady Catherine one was just too good. XD
| The Vampire's Liaison chapter 7 . 3/3/2010
Very nice. *Snicker. I am entertained.
| The Vampire's Liaison chapter 6 . 3/3/2010
It is often hard, in this story, to tell who is speaking. You don't specify enough sometimes. Stand alone quotes don't always need a name, but when there are this many people, nameless filler characters, talking at once, its hard to tell whats going on at times.
Still, the story as a whole is wonderful and hilarious and I really enjoyed it. And in response to YOUR response to my last review, no I'm not a Narnia fan. I have heard that it's well written, but I can't get over the attempt to shove jesus in lion form down my throat. No patience for religious allegory. Do you write Narnia Fanfic as well? Why can't those be posted here?
| The Vampire's Liaison chapter 5 . 3/2/2010
Where in the hell did you come up with all those insane euphemisms? I mean, I got horizontal kickstand right away, but I still don't understand 'swing dancing tomato sandwich' or 'hypoallergenic bendy straw'.
| The Vampire's Liaison chapter 3 . 3/2/2010
I didn't realize until this moment how funny you were. I knew you had it in you, but I didn't know it was so readily available and abundant. I loved your rendition of Pride and Prejudice (Hated Austen in high school, made peace with her in college) and I laughed aloud (and got awkward stares from the strangers sitting beside me in this lobby) at the line about Inuyasha eating all of Kagome's shampoo. I'm having a lot of fun right now.
| The Vampire's Liaison chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Loved the line? Brilliant! Moving on.
| Yolen Yui chapter 7 . 2/1/2010
I like Inuyasha's ears, everyone likes da ears :D It's a little funny that guy had something crawl into his pants...
| tomoe-gozen52 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I'm enjoying all of your stories. I love your sense of humour and like your style of including the ficlets around each chapter. You deal well with dialog and pacing and your characterizations are good. The only critique I might have is that I think you sometimes push the plot/s to manipulate the characters instead of letting the characters find their own way within the context. It's a minor quibble, though, since the result is always entertaining.
| Ai Kisugi chapter 7 . 6/19/2008
OK. That was hilarious! I laughed so hard that I cried. I also loved the Prode and Predjuidice spoof. I was an English Lit major and that had me ROTFL as well. Keep up the good work! :-)
| Nabob chapter 7 . 6/6/2008
Loved this. Witty and utterly hilarious, I actually had to cover my mouth to keep myself from laughing so as not to alarm the tourists or my co-workers. This definitely brightened my day, your sense of humour never fails.
| Beloved2615 chapter 7 . 6/3/2008
thats was cute and entertaining. Good job.