|Reviews for Safe Haven|
| Tomed Ceht chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Absolutely beautiful story. You certainly deserve waaaay more reviews than you have. I was intranced the entire way! Please, write another D/S story, you have their characteristics down to the T. Beautiful, beautiful. Absolutely georgeous! ;)
| Eventhorizon7 chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
I just want to say that i thought this story was amazing! I loved the way that you captured Sam and Daniel's feelings,at how it grew into a deep and abiding love story. The characters are spot on, every nuance like those shown in the show. It is one of the best stories i have read and your technique is wonderfully tight and meaningful.
I know that you now write mainly Sam/Cam fiction, but please...please consider going back to this story and finishing it off. The bittersweet ending is so sad, after such a long journey to get them back to the point that they were at...it somehow seems wrong to end it by having Daniel leave her and the baby again.
If nothing else, please consider writing a short sequel where he comes back again as he does in the tv episode Threads. I know you haven't written for some time, but honestly you are a really good writer and you just don't lose that ability. If you really don't want to write a sequel then give permission for someone else to write it on your behalf?
| drgemini24 chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
This was very nice. I loved everything about this, except of course where you chose to end it - agh, evil fic writer! : p It would've been nice to have a concrete happy ending. Oh... and you might wanna consider chapterising it - when I was reading it on my phone, it broke it up into six pages. lol.
I like how Sam and Daniel gradually become aware of their attraction to each other, and that she wasn't daft enough to make a go of things with Jack because there would be so many things that she would have to fix with him. Daniel has deep emotional issues but he doesn't have major character flaws... at least he'd be able to open up to her.
I like how you've built the story up over the course of Stargate history, following the major events and building the sub-story around it. Beautiful. I swear, if Upgrades, and Divide and Conquer were like your versions, they'd be so much better. The Upgrades bit on the ship I particularly liked because it was more realistic.
The office-massage was nice - he's such a sweet, giving and loving man who can do those kind of things and not expect anything in return. *sigh* The locker-room scene was funny - ahem, actually eye-opening what with, um, towel!Daniel...
I like how they both learn to love again after various either failed, disastrous or tragically ending relationships. Those two are like two halves of the same person. It's kinda funny how he stands by her despite her being stand-offish towards him at times, because he knows that it's just those Jack-like barbs she uses to protect herself, although he did seem a tad exasperated when she wouldn't loosen up on that Archaeological mission. But he's patient and knows that it takes time for her to thaw.
I love how they try to keep the relationship under wraps for the sake of their jobs, although T-man suspects that something's going on. That man is just darn clever. Daniel's excuse about needing Sam for a translation was priceless - I could just imagine Jack's face if he had known about the relationship at the time... : D
The Prisoners thing was kinda sad but no-one was really themselves in that epi - it was nice how they eventually made up (thanks to Janet!) and got talking about it, although one wonders how much ice he put in that glass... lol
The proposal scene was so sweet, and as for Jacob... well, the man's a big teddy bear (esp. after Selmak being in him). Plus, Carmen Argenziano's a SamDaniel shipper. Woot. Ha, and the honeymoon on the Light planet. lol. I could just imagine Jack's face when Loren asked where Sam and Daniel were going. lol : D
And Meridian... that was ultra sad, esp. with Sam being pregnant, and then having to go through it all alone... despite Daniel doing his Ancient thing and visiting while she was asleep. And then he comes back but doesn't remember her - I can imagine her anger, frustration and pain at that.
Like how Jack supported Sam and JC during the ascended year, being 'Uncle Jack'. Nice that the man could open up to her about Charlie a little (which is a lot for Jack, considering).
Glad that Daniel eventually remembered who he was and his connection to Sam, and that he made up with her as well as his daughter (or rather began to in the latter case). JC was so sweet. lol.
Love the jokes about Daniel's organising system, or rather lack of a coherent one. Selmak's fun.
Poor, poor Sam and Daniel... hopefully there's hope at the end, but you ended it too soon!
Great, great story - nice job,
| catgirl789 chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
That was the greatest SD couple one-shot I have EVER read. Thanks for writing it. I'd like to see a sequel or extra chapter. Again thanks a bunch!
| Dreamer22 chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
wow I really liked seeing the differences that appeared in the different eps because of Sam and Daniel's relationship. very well done
| Mrs-Spacemonkey-Jackson chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
More! More! More! Please? :D
| Col.SamanthaCarter chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
Oh I loved it! Any thoughts on writing a sequel? :)
| Jess13 chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
That was a beautiful story! Your portrayal of Sam's relationship with Daniel, especially the little subtle things like teasing, so well. Sad that it had to end with Daniel being killed by RepliCarter, but I really enjoyed it. Thanks for such a great read!
| KatieMichelleBelle chapter 1 . 12/11/2006