Reviews for Harry Potter and the Warlord |
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![]() ![]() i loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is absolutely amazing! I'm enjouing it so much that i re-read from the beginning up till this point! please do continue and i anticipate the next chapter! Kamui |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for another good chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Made my day! Whenever a chapter comes out from this story, it truly does make my day! Hope we get more soon! This story still seems like the beginning, at the top of the roller coaster, can't wait for more A Greedy Fan, Kevin |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh great greif I didn't even know you updated until just today! I want you to know you have made me a near devoted near fanatical fan! I love how you have etched this story into being, the snatches of the future are brillant as good as cliffhangers but not nearly as evil... Its great to see Harry iteracting with everyone in such a way that the book is maintained in structure but so different in contrast! Questions range from if Harry is the Hogwarts heir does this mean that not only do the house elves but the very portrats obey him... Not that they are going to you mind but I was curious as they usually only help the Headmaster if their loyalty now went first most to Harry. The ghosts seem to be on his side maybe not the Bloody Baron...I might have just intrepreted his line wrong.. Moving on the second question would be excluding the obvious of course Harry and his father I get that anger dwindles over time but why would Harry bother to give his father this next opening, when it surves him no purpose and the elder Potter hasn't really done anything to help Harry release his inner issues with him, if you keep pushing on an open wound it will never heal and if its already posioned sometimes you have to administer the anidote or cut out the infection. I don't really see Harry going up to his father and baring his hurts at the man for no reason or even at all with the current setting there is just too much in the way of making it meaningful or realistic...I think I have been wrong many many many times before. Well best of luck forgive the lack of proper punctuation I'm having issues with my key board and update soon lots of inspiration your in my favorites! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Exciting story. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG ... I think I ADORE YOU! (Hear the "squee" of a new fangirl. Be afraid. Be very afraid! XD) I seriously hope to see more since I more or less read all of this in one go (my bum seems to be tingling). It's so enthralling and well written! Not to mention the plot twists and ideas that are slowly emerging without anyone noticing (well, I've been detecting a pattern but that's neither here nor there). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story. Hope you continue to write it! Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() brillient story, i couldnt stop reading it. update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've always like the split personality approach some authors have in a dimension jumping story like this. Though you put it to another level in this story. Jannus's jump to wealth is logical, unlike some stories out there. I love the relationship with Remus and Harry/Janus. It's messed up and yet ethical at the same time. I look forward to future chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats definately an interesting story you've got there. Let's see where you're going to take it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "[...] why he managed to get a second familiar after his expulsion from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry." oO He gets expelled? Damn, but you got me curious now :P Nice chapter, loved the Hogwarts history scene. Keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Skippity doo, doo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is a really, really intersting story. I like this self-confident, ruthless and devious Harry even if he irritates me sometimes. I will wait for the next chapter (congratulations for theit length !) with impatience ! |