Reviews for Penance
OneshotPrincess chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Both of these stories are so amazingly well-written, they almost fell like canon!
Jaricchi chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
This was wonderful.

Thank you so much for sharing.
killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Loved it
Sychronergy chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
So sad. i-i
narubleone chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
so sweet when near and mello held hands! so sad about l and light.

But i love it!
31esilenna chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
in the end was that mellos way of trying to be nice to ls lover or something...maybe lover wasnt the right word but whatever
Siri02 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
This is probably my fifth time rereading this 2-parter, and I don't quite understand why I didn't review the first time around. Better late than never, right? :)

Anyway, I REALLY loved it though I do have my share of questions and I thought the characterization was great! ...What exactly did happen to L?
Yami-no-Hikari-7 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
Aw. That was so sad and sweet. So did L commit suicide to be with Light? Gr8 job. It was a good fic.
Addictedreader09 chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
omg how sad! very nice story about mello though i like it
we are Romantic chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
i absolutely loved it.

): sadly though, the contents do not exactly fit with the anime or manga.
tlcplusp chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Ah. :D I like this so much more than Justice. (Which, it occurs to me, I don't think I reviewed, I'll go check. XO) Don't ask me why, I have no clue. I just like this better. :)

Any particular reason Mello was choosen to be L? Speaking of L, yes, I love you! *virtual high five* I've had the idea of an L succession line for awhile, so yay, I'm not the only one! Sorry, I'm a loser. :D

Yeah, I like how you portrayed Mello and Near, and I think you succeded in writing about L without him being present, so you get extra points for trying something difficult! *continues to be a loser*


Pirate Bo chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Bo: awe soo sad.

Ski: good oneshot.
Prince-Malice chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
i loved the first one! and this one is just as GOOD! i really love this one too.
phoenix of hell chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
As sad as th other, and as beautifully written. Nice turn of events, Mello becoming L is certainly interesting. You also portrayed Matsuda very well.
False-Image chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Aw! How sad ( It was really well written! I'm a little surprised that L chose Mello..I would thought it'd be Near..Anyways, awesome fanfic! Keep writing )
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