Reviews for Altered States
Finished Here Let's Get a Beer chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
This has been one of my favorite stories for years-the simplicity of the one sentence exercise leaves so much room for exploration and interpretation. Wonderful job-it always keeps me coming back when I need a short, simple fix. Thanks!
huinsutt99 chapter 3 . 2/12/2013
This is a great story.
scorchedtrees chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
Not sure if you'll be continuing, but either way, this is awesome! A really unique way to tell a story :)
MagicalBender chapter 3 . 10/15/2012
Are you ever going to finish? It's really good! If you ever have time, I think you should :)
Dr. Phalange chapter 3 . 8/8/2012
Aww, is this the end? I hope not. This was absolutely perfect.
Dr. Phalange chapter 2 . 8/8/2012

Dr. Phalange chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Just beautiful.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
Adorable. You delivered a beautiful story, each sentence speaking volumes! Cool format to use
AlwaysWinning chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I love (43. God) hehe anything involving Zuko and his crew is pure win! Haha and imagining his face after the end! Ahh, next chapter here I come.
SilverStella chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
Hey! Maybe you should just signal this as complete! ;P
pheonix13 chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
yay! happy ending or the zutaraians! ;)
Reviewanonym chapter 3 . 11/25/2009

dwelian chapter 3 . 6/29/2009
This is such a sweet tale. I love the drabble format too! Thanks for sharing it with us!
janedoe401 chapter 3 . 2/11/2009
It's amazing how you are able to make a continuous story from word prompts!
Oliviax3 chapter 3 . 8/22/2008
This was so... well, it took my breath away to say the least. It was beautiful and fluid and so many things were unsaid, hidden and described in such few words. That takes talent!

This was extraordiary! XD
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