|Reviews for Lights, Camera, Heartbreak|
| kisstina123 chapter 32 . 9/7/2010
this is a great story keep it up! and PLEASE update SOON! haha
| Nightgemini25 chapter 32 . 8/9/2010
oh my. its been so long since ive been on fanfiction, and your story was my number one to check for an update (since you were on my favorites list). im so happy though! this was definetely one of the best chapters of it all. :) so sweet...my favorite. hope you update soon.
| NikkiNonsensex chapter 32 . 7/29/2010
Oh my goodness. I just happened to think about your story yesterday by chance and OH MY GOD, I'm happy that I looked. Thank you so much for writing more! I absolutely loved all of the new chapters. It was painful and beautiful and just amazing.. And it doesn't bother me at all that this is so much different than the movies. (I would rather Twilight the movie be more like your story! Including actors...) You made me ache and smile and even tear a little. You have a wonderful gift. Thank you for sharing this with me.
| feshabobesha chapter 32 . 7/27/2010
Oh my goodness. I could hug you. That was beautiful. :'D
| GoldenEyesRock chapter 32 . 7/25/2010
Awww, Katie! Not Jason again! Is she crazy? I mean, his control-freak maniacal tendencies are bordering stalker. Okay, not bordering. More like, way surpassing. But this whole Edward/Jacob dynamic should be interesting...
I'm glad one of your characters finally came around, though. Yay for single Henry! Too bad he's probably not in real life :(
Update soon to break the monotony of my summer!
| Mel chapter 32 . 7/25/2010
AS ALWAYS, I LOVED IT!
Thank you so much for updating, really! It must be difficult, but we appreciate it an awful lot :) It really made my day to see a notification in my email inbox so thank you, really 3
That aside, I think you write great! It's perfect :) I think you appropriately ended the angst in this chapter, and I look forward to fluffier, happier chapters! Megan is finally done with (or at least I hope so!) Thank you for not making it draggy and ending all their angst here! I hope the story can move on from there and idk, perhaps we will read about Henry trying to win Katie back!
As always, I love your Henry characterization! I think it's so apt, and I'm really really falling in love with your Henry! I have no words to say, so please, never ever stop writing, while I pray that your inspiration never dies out!
| smileon chapter 32 . 7/25/2010
brilliant! yay! I'm so giddy because of this chapter lol.
| love2read101 chapter 32 . 7/24/2010
hey! another great chapter. i love that henry is getting his onw medicine from katie. just dont let it last too long ok? haha thank you so much for updating! i have been checking everyday. dont rush it but plz geta chapter on her soon. looking forward to it. great work. you are an excellent writer. i love your style.
| xalwaysxwinterx chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I'm a horrible reviewer, I'm sorry. But I've been with this story since the beginning and it's just absolutely magical.
Some things I love about your story:
The angst is at a minimal level, even when it's angsty, I understand it's the further the plot and I enjoy a little bit of it anyways.
The people. I love Katie, she's the most amazing character, if I met her in real life I'd have to give her a huge hug.
And now Henry dumped Megan, and he's being all cute with Katie.
Please update soon, I thought this was your best chapter, despite the rushed break-up between Henry and Megan.
| honestlyclutzy chapter 32 . 7/23/2010
yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay YAY!
| RossxRachel4ever chapter 32 . 7/23/2010
SOOO GLAD that Henry dumped Megan! :D :D :D
And that he and Katie seem to have an understanding now. Ahhh, makes me happy. Good chapter!
| Writer in the Meadow chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
By the way, I just read a review by someone, and I think they're full of it. Something about the Henry part being wrong with Megan? Yeah, load of crap. There ARE people like that, my own sister being one of them, who says things EXACTLY like that. Who are spiteful and petty and straight up rude. They exist, all too frequently, so in my opinion, you did that perfectly. Because once again, I've had a Megan like person in my life too...
| Writer in the Meadow chapter 32 . 7/23/2010
Psha. It cooperated. :D I adored everything in this chapter. Oh my heavens. I just went through all sorts of emotions reading this chapter. I was excited, and happy, and mad... oh it was great! My heart even fluttered a few times ;)
"Okay. I could do this. I could be polite and ignore the k-i-s-s. I was afraid to even think the word in my head."
So Katie. I love it.
The flashback to the "magic word" was brilliant. You could not have put that better. Well done.
"There was mischief in his expression, and he made a funny face at me. Against my better judgment, I cracked up, easing back from my almost-fetal position without thinking."
I love that Henry is just... Henry. He does everything possible to make her comfortable... but he doesn't have to TRY. It's just HIM. It's fabulous.
"Henry began to sing along with the radio. Very loudly… and very off-key. I couldn't help myself; I doubled over laughing, and then I started to sing with him."
And this-this is even better :D
"Oh, how I missed him. I didn't deny, just to myself, that I missed Henry. I missed teasing him, and seeing him smile for me, and being able to say and do anything and have him just… be there. I'd never had a relationship like that with anyone before, male or female. It was surprising how quickly I'd grown accustomed to something I had known would be transient."
So, I've personally been in this situation. And it sucks. However, those few moments when you actually get to BE with that person, and really realize how much you miss them and everything you are with them (which is so natural and comfortable). You portrayed this perfectly. My applauds to you.
""I miss you." The words slipped out; they were an inevitable result of the kiss, the meadow scene, the talking, the laughing."
Finally. At least someone said it!
Everything about Henry's answer is phenomenal. It's honesty, and truth and pure emotion. So raw. And vulnerable.
"I shut my eyes. Looking at him would make getting the words out even more impossible. "I would have said… to go to her.""
I know how that is. Once again, a VERY realistic line and train of emotion because this is exactly what I said in this situation as well. Why do us girls ALWAYS become saps and worry about him instead of ourselves so often? You have a lovely way of making everything realistic, which I am most grateful for. Good on ya!
"His hand released the door handle. "You say you loved me in the past tense. It's not true anymore?"
I smiled at him tiredly. "A question for a question, and I've answered mine.""
This line annoyed me just because I wanted to slap Katie because of it :P
""That slut," she growled. "I warned her, Henry. I know it isn't your fault, and you're too much of a gentleman to make it clear, but I told her she wasn't to play with you anymore. I can't believe she kissed you.""
I hate Megan. And everything she stands for. Her and her un-trusting, prideful, pettiness can go lick a screen door.
That is all.
""Good luck in Milan, or Tokyo, or wherever the hell it is you left your soul.""
Best. Line. Ever. I love Henry. :D That is all.
"He grinned, looking completely unabashed. "No. This is pleasure, not business.""
This line reminds me of The Italian Job with Handsome Rob, and I just bust up laughing. He's still super creepy...
"Plus… maniacal tendencies aside, Jason was pretty cute."
Yup. She's crazy. Really, Katie? REALLY? Oi...
""Katie, please. I need you. I know it's selfish, and I don't deserve it, but I need my friend."
I could hear the tears he was trying to hold back, and instantly I sat up, jamming my feet into flip-flops and scribbling a hasty note to my mother, who was already snoring again."
Such a tender moment. All together now... Awwww!
"And there he was- still in today's clothes, tears trickling down his face."
I missed this line the first time I read through this. :( Henry... That makes me want to cry!
I love how protective Henry is of her, especially against Megan and her name calling crap. It is AWESOME, and makes me happy :)
I think that's my favorite line of the chapter. Yes, I can forgive you. YAY!
""Well… yes, but within reason!" He exclaimed."
I concur with Henry.
"Henry grinned, and with his arms around me, he murmured in my ear, "Excellent. Then I reserve the right to try to change your mind." Softly, he kissed the hollow beneath my ear. I shivered.
I tried to push him off, and failed. "You're not playing fair."
He seemed to consider my accusation for a second, and then he leaned in to kiss me before I knew what he was doing. His lips met mine for the second time today, and I couldn't breathe. Sensation shot up and down my spine, and deep in my stomach, I felt a strange little tug.
Henry lifted his head, a tiny smile on his lips. The lips I'd just kissed. Oh, good heavens- literally. "Have it your way. I'll play fair… unless you tell me otherwise." He stood, and I wanted to protest, already missing his warmth and touch."
Um, yeah. This little scene right here made the chapter. I was in awe, and just... wow. Hot. And adorable all at the same time. THAT, my friend, is good writing.
SUCH an amazing chapter. If anyone flames you, ever, I will personally verbally and electronically BEAT them. "Suppose" fit PERFECTLY for them. Such a cute song too. Ah man. The one problem with reviewing and having read it already is that I don't have another chapter to read. Sigh. Until next time... :D I'm excited!
| cordqueen chapter 32 . 7/23/2010
I'm squealing I'm so excited he got rid of the wench! Now we get to watch him win Katie back, right? Great job!
| Lauren James chapter 32 . 7/23/2010
Finally! Henry dumped that hussy! I'm so glad Katie is on the way to forgiving him!
Can't wait for more!