Reviews for Obscure
Pleasent Sea Nights chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
So you have a good story. Great story. But there is some problems in it. First off you should 1. Update it and give us the story of wht happened to get Ari and Tony together or 2. Tell us what happened from the very beginning at the start of the story. Also it would be more appealing if you put the characters as Ari and Tony. That is all I can think of right now. Also don't think that this is a bad review or something along those lines. These are just suggestions of what would make more People read this great story.
Liveforthemoments chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Odd... Interesting... Good
adrian chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
oh

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another tony/ari fic

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and dedicated to me

thanks

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i really enjoyed it

though i do wonder how they ended up there i kinda like not knowing

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ive got this image of them on a sparsly populated island that no one ever visits so they cant get off

and i assume theyd be isolated from the rest of the population due to how those closed communities dont like strangers and all

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i like aris thoughts of stockholm syndrome

it does seem so perfect

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the only thing i would wish to see is a view of what happens if they were ever to be found

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how would the team react to seeing tony and ari involed like this

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how would gibbs react

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and it would be interesting to see tonys reaction to how the team has changed to see if he was replaced or if gibbs kept just kate and tim

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is there any possibility of convincing you

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either way

a great little ficlet

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thanks

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