Reviews for Tent Games
Soxirh Megs chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
This story is simply lovely! And I can read it over and over again and never get tired of it. Riku being the obvious one was the best part ( to me of course ), we don't see it everyday. Oh, and I never camped so I didn't knew of the games, but it's really nice to know them. If I ever camp with someone, I will play 20 questions. Hehe
Ceri Moriarty chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Awww, very cute! It's nice to see Riku being the oblivious one for once!

…you're the one that wrote Through the Window. I read that a couple months ago, I think, and absolutely LOVED it. It was fabulous.

Like this one.

You rock. Keep writing, you're really good at it~!
Amberbydreams chapter 1 . 12/29/2009

I'm no longer squeamish to any rating of fic!


This is adorable!

I need to start actually searching through people's profiles instead of letting my friend tell me "Oh, hey, there's a Soriku side-oneshot off WTHIML, didn't you know?"



Yay! Girly sleepover games!

I've never heard of 'Are you nervous yet' before, and I sorta hope it never comes up in one of the girly sleepovers (Being bi, I'd probly have to abstain). But it's definitely an awesome game here!

There are a couple typos, but I"m not one to talk, since I hardly ever do major editing to my fics...

Great oneshot! .
Mikan-citrus fruits chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Heh, that was cute! _ I love SoRiku!


"Hey Axel"

"Yeah Roxas?"

"Do you think they realized they forgot us here yet?"

Kive chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
...M Sora/Riku'

Well it does make much more sense now...

and yay! we get to know what happened xD
1557757 chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
So yeah. Cliche plot, but I love the time you take with the detail.

I really have to ask again: Will you marry me?

(I'm pretty sure that still isn't legal... ANYWAY.)

I think it's time to go see what else you've written. -grins-

ForForever chapter 1 . 3/21/2009

that was so cute x3
Axel's Ashes chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Squee! I can't believe Riku was so dense... haha.

Made me laugh! Oodles of fluff!
S.RAYN chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
And I love sweet nice fluffy one-shots just like this one!
Night Xiniall chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
So, that's what happened while Roxas and Axel were lost... Hee hee... -goes to read that again-

LilyFlare chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
So incredibly adorable! You are the Goddess of Fluff! -bows down-
Thatz chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
oh yeah! I also printed ths out yesterday, in some dire sense of something good to read, and I loved it. I love the 'are you nervous yet?' game. did you come up with it?

I would love to use it in a fanfiction... It leads to an almost certain makeout scene. Except I would make it between Axel and Roxas, because Axels not afraid to touch ROxas, and Roxas' will will try to keep him going for a s long as possible.

Except, I have no way of leading into this, and- OOH! I got's me an Idea... that I will never write... ;-;

They are best friends, and they sleepover at eachothers houses alot. Both of them have been feeling weird around the other for some time, but don't know how to express it. Axel is the one who sugests the game, after many hours of eating, DDR, and gaming. They are about to go to sleep, so in Roxas' stupor, hes says ok, as long as it's quick.

Axels touch on his stomach was a suprising one as he wasn't really paying attention to the games rules before hand.

"Are you nervous yet?"

Roxas' face went up in a blush as he stuttered his answer. "Y-Yeah..."

Axel Smirked and removed his hand. "Your turn."

Roxas, being wide awake now, shifted so he was facing Axel, and slowly moved his hand up the faint abs in front of him. "Are you nervous yet?"

Axel's face held a slight smirk and something defiant in his eyes. "of course not."

Roxas blushed even harder as he ran his hand back down the pale stomach towards the belly button. He dipped his fingers below the hemline of the red-heads boxers.

"yes" Axel gasped out.

so, what do you think? good start?

I would love your feedback. and if you don't wnat me using the game, just let me know, ok?
Moshi Moshi Mai chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
AWW! XD Wait...Where are Axel and Roxas? XD
Robin Knight chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
*whuh* *shudder* This Story got its way down the "belt-line". WOW! Wonderful Story, thanks! :D :D :D
splee chapter 1 . 5/18/2007



xDD im hyper



...i love sora's stupid, girly tent games too xDD
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