|Reviews for Marauders and Mistakes|
| ShiftWithTheWind chapter 1 . 4/2
I remember this one. Always thought it was cute, though the excessive animal noises and burping would make it an awkward read-aloud. I actually like the introductory paragraph a lot, it sets the childish tone immediately with Lily first daydreaming about boys, then turning right around and scorning them as soon as she notices the Marauders. Also, your natural skill for good pacing shows here, even this early in your works.
You could probably do a better job at writing youthful-sounding dialogue though, at least for the boys. Like this line; "Why thank you, Peter. It was, wasn't it?" Come on, twelve-yr-olds are much ruder and stupid sounding. Just saying. :P
Two down. The longer your stuff the more I'll have to say. Onward!
| Lucky's Girl chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Very funny! I loved how you made Sirius turN it into a joke.
Typical sirius! Everyone reaction was great! Especially lily.
I liked the insight to frank and alice. Its nice to see them
All together. I thought it was a great story and the colored ears
Were too much!
| SalohcinSilverwing chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
That was hilarious. I'll never look at donkeys the same way again.
I wonder how I would look with donkey ears?
| MissMilkMaid chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
I really like this stroy! it is so funny! Poor Lily.
Potter was just so, so-” she struggled to find a word that was terrible enough to describe him.
“Charming,” James offered.
Ha! so funny
| dazedkitten chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
*grins* this is precious! You've done a fantastic job with the characters of twelve-year-olds...