Reviews for Destiny
crailis chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Halfway through this, I was absolutely breathless. I adore the way you describe the way Toph sees what goes on between Aang and Katara. It is absolutely stunning in so many ways, and definently beautiful.

The way you put Tophs progressing feelings between her and Sokka was beautifully done as well.

Wonderful. Just simply wonderful.
Phoenix'sSoul chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
Good story. You write very well and I like the images you place within the story.
The Pterodactyl chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Well, can I just say that your "nondescript fluff" has shattered my seriously written stuff with a flick of its little finger? You continue to amaze me with your command of adjectives...something as simple as a river or a tree holds such power when you deign to describe it. And romance? Something that is as abstract and beautiful as this, without the flowery descriptors, is certainly worthy of your talents. You've made the obvious chemistry of Toph and Sokka all the sweeter with your ability to tell the tale in just the right words. And now, I will beg you to continue to write more Avatar, whatever strikes your fancy, as your loving readers will certainly appreciate it, whatever it is.
origamistarshape chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
magnificent! i really really like how this whole story flowed
Darksword'Shiningpen chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
I had a smile at the end. keep up the good work
BlackBlur87 chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
Ow. This kicked the crud out of my story with the visuals alone. The characters were perfectly matched to the show. I think I've found both a mentor and rival.
missmonday chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
I really loved this.

The running theme (about destiny and the glowing) was

done really well and I think you write beautifully.

alos tokka is pretty sweet )
EE's Skysong chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
What a wonderful fic. It captured how pragmatically Toph views the world. "Go be special and stuff. I've got REAL work to do." And the fact that it was Tokka was just wonderful. :D
xXxEndangeredSpeciesxXx chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
This is so brilliant, it's mind-blowing! Seriously, my mouth is still agape as I write...It's beautiful and fascinating and poetic and just perfect in every way. I am truly astounded. Congratulations for writing this profound piece of work!
Ron Weasly girl chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
... dude,




(fav stories)
Lambbaby chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
Wow. Just wow. I love,love,love this story and I can see why you said you really like it to. This was beautiful. Your descriptions were beautiful and so very visual. I think I'll actually be looking for a glow from Aang and Katara when new episodes come on.

And the way you describe Toph and Sokka was perfect. Steel and rock, I don't think there is a better way to describe the two of them.

Do you have more stories like this? This was an amazing piece and before I start babbling I'm going to end this review.
A very odd fellow chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
Wow. I love your writing style. Also, I enjoy the way that Toph and Sokka complement each other. His sight and strategy work so well with her earthsight and bending. Congratulations on a great fic.
Ari and Mo chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
Oh. My. God.

That was BEYOND amazing. Words simply cannot describe the beauty you have written here. It's just so perfect. Your wording was magnificent and characterization spot-on. I cannot find ANYTHING to nitpick about. BRAVO! I look forward to more of your work!
Changeling10 chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
Amazing. This piece of fluff is superb writing. I really loved this new story of yours. I love the Toph/Sokka pairing, and this little epilogue presented a very believable way in which they could begin a relationship. I loved the imagery of brightness and shadow, in respects to Aang and Katara to Toph and Sokka. It has perhaps already been mentioned, but Aang and Katara usually are the "glowing" ones that get noticed. Toph and Sokka, however, really should not be forgotten, even if they are not as recognized. They may be in the background but, as some silly saying goes, the top bananna is supported by the rest of the bunch. All in all, I'd say Toph and Sokka have their own glow, and you wrote it so well. Thank you for another great fan fic.

You are going onto my favorites list, by the way.

Sifu Toph
Meet Me Halfway chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
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