|Reviews for walk like an egyptian|
| morganna12 chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
love the idea of finn and rory dating. but u might want to like put the song lyrics in italics. and some simple grammar, caplization, stuff like that.
| literatiwhore chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Use capital letters, put spaces in between lines of dialogue, don't put whole songs in.
| princetongirl chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
loved it update soon
| avesnovuelan chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
You need to use capital letters and put spaces between your lines of dialogue. But I really like the concept. Also I think you can get in trouble for putting an entire song in your fic. One or two lines is okay, but not an entire song. I liked it. I'd like to see you write a full-lenghth PDLD.
| Curley-Q chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
| kellerkind chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
Okay, well, I think the idea is quite good, but it's so hard to concentrate on the storyline, because you have to put your concentration on reading it. Maybe you could just try to use capitals, that would help so much already, and you could put the song in italic so that it's more clear for us readers.
I really love stories with Rory and Finn, so I hope for maybe a whole story?