|Reviews for Kinship|
| TC chapter 5 . 11/21/2013
Very good series so far but this insistence of referring to River as a child is infuriating. She's 17 not 7, if the next part is supposed to involve a romantic sub-plot, having one of the key characters treated like a child is not a good pre-amble to it. It's just creepy.
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/26/2013
I don't know if you're still writing Firefly fanfic, but I just wanted to say that I loved reading this! It really held true to the characters. I'll have to check out your other stories.
| Jaycie Victory chapter 5 . 7/14/2013
Love how well you speak in all the crew's voices. But my favourite is how you treat River and Jayne. So much fun to see how their relationship develops. So much fun to see the strings being tied and becoming steel cords ;-)
| Vanna chapter 5 . 6/14/2013
Thank you so much for writing this EXCELLENT story! I am enjoying the series so much! I wouldn't have imagined that Jayne and River could get along so well but you made the story and dialogue so believable and in-character! This and "Two Gorram Days" are some of the most endearing stories I've read!
| MaddAlice chapter 5 . 1/29/2013
Loved this one as well, they're so well done :)
| Aurilia chapter 2 . 1/11/2013
'The Captain Has His Head Up His Pigu' - I'm tempted to write it, if you haven't already.
| ahbuggrit chapter 5 . 10/15/2012
Love the crew interactions in this chapter as well :) It's very well-written and you portray the characters rather faithfully :)
I do enjoy reading Jayne and River's relationship as it progresses and grows
| kurtainkid chapter 3 . 8/24/2012
So I always feel dumb reviewing something posted so long ago, and maybe its the alcohol I was drinking but I laughed for like 5 minutes over your "Mal's killed people and knows how. You've never committed suicide and would probably bungle it." Love it. Good work on the story.
| butchinthestreets chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
I like the colors you've had River perceive.
| butchinthestreets chapter 4 . 8/11/2012
This chapter in particular is very nicely paced.
| butchinthestreets chapter 3 . 8/11/2012
The only words I know for 'cousin' are the ones for younger ones, biao di and biao mei. So at first I thought biao xiong's xiong was for bear. Caused much mirth.
| butchinthestreets chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
I love how balanced you write Simon.
| butchinthestreets chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Since this is just the un-toned pin ying, I thought he was calling her a small turtle. Oops.
| KusajishiFukutaicho chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
"River, no more wasting syrup on non-edible objects, do you understand me?"
"You, go clean up the sticky mess on the table. You, go clean up the sticky mess on your head."
| bookworm914 chapter 5 . 7/24/2012
These stories are really great!
I always feel in J/R stories that Jayne's voice gets changed a bit to make the story work, and I do feel that here as well. But the change is small and consistent. And every other character is voiced exactly as we got to know them! Wash and River and Kaylee et al are all perfect! It's fabulous. Thanks.