|Reviews for Bittersweet Sixteen|
| amy chapter 20 . 12/26/2014
Its been a while O.O I really wanna know the ending. When is it gonna come out...been 2 years now...
| SunnyDog1203 chapter 20 . 6/12/2014
Love this story! I really hope you update soon :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
| melisha0209 chapter 20 . 1/28/2014
im sooo happy that i get to read these amazing shikaino stories..you're such a good writer and i always enjoy reading your stories...im so addicted to shikaino just lately, but i do hope you keep writing... and please do update!
| chels chapter 2 . 11/23/2013
I love that last part to the chapter its hilarious
| athena star chapter 20 . 6/14/2013
Me encanta tu historia, me mata el suspenso, actualiza pronto, por favor!
| Emily chapter 20 . 6/6/2013
You can't just not update for 9 yrs..
| ahmadaziz chapter 20 . 5/12/2013
heyyyyy where is the next part of this fic ?
| daviesdao chapter 20 . 4/26/2013
dear author I hate you so much right now i pulled an allnighter reading this thinking it was about Naruto and ino and thought naruino was the main couple when it turned out it was just another inoshika fanfic and the main couple was
inoshika the whole time i didn't realize this until chapter 15
and you just used the idea of Naru ino to spark jealousy in shikamaru to bring shika ino together
the writing is pretty good though and you completely fooled me
i was really hoping for naruto and ino damn you
| mitzigouenji chapter 20 . 4/8/2013
Still no update? :U I wanna finish this story until the end :3
| DreamInVintage chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I stumbled across this gem of a story and fell in love with it. I'm blown away by your characterizations and humorous, yet extremely powerful and addicting plot. I read all 20 chapters in a few hours and now I'm begging you, PLEASE continue this story and update! I know it's been three years since you've updated, but I'm just hoping that I'm not too late.
I honestly enjoy this so much, I'll bake you 37 batches of cookies if you update soon!
| shelvesinthecloset chapter 20 . 9/30/2012
Kind of really hoping you decide to pick this up again one day...
| Reader chapter 7 . 8/13/2012
"So now I have a date with Ino... great. What am I supposed to do with her, anyway?
Naruto sighed. Why hadn't anyone warned him that getting the girl to agree to go out with you was only the first step in a complicated task? There should have been a whole training class on it back at the academy!"
I really laughed at the first line, its so like Naruto since he has no romantic interest for Ino at all!
For the second clip: I would really be amused if schools would actually hold a class for this fun topic. Haha. But really, dating would be better consulted within the family since it is a form of bonding and a relay of the family history (triumphs and mistakes, from the parent's first date to their designated dates in marriage.)
I liked the fact that you got Iruka in here. He's an important person in Naruto's life. He adds to the story's authenticity. Fanfiction or not your story's good!
The beginning scene in Ino's bedroom really made me grin wide, ninja or not - Ino's still a girl who needs her privacy, her immediate reaction of self defense made me laugh and feel sorry for Shika.
Shikamaru's reactions and responses made me feel as Ino did - confused. But since I know the basis of what he's saying, I felt as he did - hurt, brought to head by this: Then the expression on his face became curiously subdued.
"So... you're saying that you do like him then," he mumbled quietly. Shikamaru suddenly broke eye contact and glanced away over her shoulder. He had a distant, coolly disinterested look on his face. "But why the coyness, Ino? You can tell me, you know," he added, sounding supremely bored. "It's not like I'm going to tease you."
| Reader chapter 6 . 8/13/2012
"She doesn't like you," he said flatly. It surprised Shikamaru that he felt some satisfaction at seeing Naruto's smile falter.
Jealousy means 2 things, and in Shikamaru's case, he's got both: wanting Ino's sole romantic attention and resenting Naruto for Ino giving him a chance.
| Reader chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
This line of thought is the beginning of both Sakura and Shikamaru's agony:
"Getting to the root of Ino's problems was not the answer; she just needed to boost her best friend's ego a bit, and Ino would take care of the rest herself. She'd bounce back to her old, over-confident self in practically no time!"
You could say this paragraph is the kick-off of your summary: "Ino is stuck in a romantic rut and Sakura's determined to help her... unfortunately her cure may prove worse than the disease."
This conversation of Naruto and Ino seals the agitation of their partners in denial.
"… I'll go with you," said Ino softly.
He was only a step from the door when her words finally penetrated his brain. Naruto swung back around and stared incredulously at Ino.
"Er… what was that?"
"Yes, I'll go out with you, Uzumaki Naruto," repeated Ino, more loudly this time. "On a date."
Haha! Well done.