|Reviews for Locked Up|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
I loved how fuu was like we tried to rape me xD! Died
| TabKinesis chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
Wow! This was really good! Right when i started this anime i became a Fuu and Mugen fan. So this story made me very happy!
| Sutemi chapter 2 . 9/19/2011
That was really good :) i enjoyed it! keep up the good work :D
| anyavolchokmail.ru chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
ROFL I love the ending) I came across the story through DevArt, glad I did ) but the accompanying picture isn't entirely...accurate _ mind if I draw an illustration?
| ShatteredRhapsody chapter 2 . 12/24/2008
PWAHAHAHAHAHA Aw, poor Jin... XD
| pinkmmlover chapter 2 . 12/20/2008
Lemony... but not over the top, I like it. Especially the ending...poor Jin, now he'll have nightmares for the rest of the journey lol.
| mende5525 chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
Oh yeah definetly going into faves!
| whyNd.Heck chapter 2 . 6/18/2008
Haha you've got Mugen and Fuu down pat...this was a good read
| japi-girl chapter 2 . 3/30/2008
I know it has been a while since I've reviewed you... but I absolutely loved this story. I love the way you describe things and your sense humor is highly in comparision to mine.
"If you even had a full name, I’d so be shouting it right now,"
I couldn't help but laught at that, and the part where Fuu mentioned death by pervert had me laughing as well. I love this story. And you are amazing author. Please take care and God bless.
p.s. If you don't mind, would you be willing to stop by and check out my new story I've got out if you have the time that is?
| DarkestScars chapter 2 . 1/27/2008
This story is so much fun. I just love the paring of Fuu and Mugen, there just to good together that... Oh I just love them together. keep the chaps coming.
| LoveShinobi4eva chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
OH M EFFING GE! THIS WAS AWESOMELY HAWT! Mt god! You did a great job! LIKE AMAZINGLY!
GEEZZ this was really good I totally love it excellent writing! :D
| Nami-Lass chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
hahahhaahaha this is hilarious! nice one!
| zzz chapter 2 . 12/24/2007
this was REALLY good, even though i think that Mugen's just a little OOC for using big words like "vulnerable" and "defenseless". but that didn't make this fanfic bad at all, just a humble opinion. i salute thee, fellow fanfic-er
| D chapter 2 . 11/17/2007
Ya did good. Thought you captured their personalities really well. Only thing is, in the first chapter when Mugen has finally got Fuu cornered you have him going straight for her crotch. Personally I would think that would freak a girl like Fuu out. Seems she would need a little coaxing before she let Mugen get that close, or even that she would be that aroused just by being near him. Just a suggestion, but maybe you could add a little bit more flirting or foreplay, sumthing? Just a friendly suggestion. I really enjoyed reading it, hope ya write more.
| 00000000000000000000000000000 chapter 2 . 10/27/2007
lol love it!