Reviews for The Final Chapter
Melpomene blue chapter 4 . 12/14/2006
Damn. Waiting for more...
pryrmtns chapter 2 . 12/14/2006
I've tried to read this chaptera few different times, but that 3rd paragraph is an overwhelming blob of type. maybe an edit where you both spellcheck and find away to break it up into several smaller paragraphs would make it more "Reader friendly"
RogueBard chapter 4 . 12/14/2006
Whumping with an impressive vocabulary... Meep! Update soon
paddington chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
this was really good!
louise chapter 4 . 12/14/2006
hi ,i am enjoying this though i hope we get to see some hurt gibbs as well as abby.

thanks
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