Reviews for A Long and Lonely Night
ardy1 chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
I thought this was wonderful. The transitions particularly were compelling. A marvelous experiment in structure that I think was very successful. There were a few errors in word use ("it's" when you meant "its" and "her" when it should have been "she" are all that I remember right now), and the opening was a bit florid in language, but really, you should be proud of yourself.
storm-of-insanity chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
I love how you've interlocked all the characters through their thoughts. It was fun trying to guess the characters of the next drabble.
MormonMaiden chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
Ooh! I liked it all. The way the drabbles linked together had to be my favorite part..wait, no.

Your idea for Ursa! I'd love to see more of that!

I don't think Aang's NOT the Avatar anymore, but I liked how you portrayed his lack of confidence. _x Till next time!
zukoaang1 chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
Nicely done. Captures the despair everyone feels fact that YOU CAPTURED OZAI PERFECTLY IS IMPRESSIVE.
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