|Reviews for Ghosts Don't Bleed|
| ObsessiveFangirl22 chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
I liked it. Nice touch to a story that will be passed down for generations. Well... not rlly but u understand :3 It wld've ben better if it was a tad bit longer.
| yo-yo's chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
im sorry to pick on you but i feel the need to point out that elphaba isnt able to fly through clouds. clouds are indeed made up of moisture which we all know elphaba is alergic to. sorry to be snappy but i felt the need to let people know this little minute detail
| sasha chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
yeah great job good stuff
| Flippernino chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
Not bad... Although, to improve your writing, I'd suggest that you might try using stronger dialogue verbs than 'replied' and 'answered' and 'asked' in such emotional dialogue that warrants them. When Glinda says, "Don't tell me what I need.", for example, I'd think that she'd utter that in a very stong voice that "Glinda replied." doesn't imply.
Also, I really can't see Elphaba and Glinda acting this way. And I don't mean their romance - I'm saying that the way they just eloped like that was just strange. Glinda has responsibilites, and Elphaba had been working so hard before this to make sure she wasn't ever discovered. Would they just forget about all that and go off together? They're not really unlimited like that by the end.
But that's just my opinion/constructive criticism. Keep writing.
| GorgeousSmile chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
This is probably one of my favorite Gelphie's...i don't know why i never reviewed, but this was an amazing job!
| Neptunes Tears chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Really..sweet. Although it bent a few things..I liked it.. Gah I'm such a sap for mush! This was really nice though, I really enjoyed it. Minor things but over all I really liked it. :)
| I Heart Idina Menzel chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
Aww so cute! Like I said before Gelphie rocks!
"Do you want me to take care of the bug" LOL I love that line!
| Thorn on a Rose chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
I really enjoyed this- And I hope to see more!
| DarkwolfKnight chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
That was a sweet story. I love it. Yeah now all of OZ will know.
| Prefect Rachel chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
Wow. I'm very impressed. It was very sweet and stayed close to what I saw in each character. I always kind of hoped Elphie and Glinda would finally recognize their love for each other. Thanks for letting them do that.