|Reviews for The End|
| safsren chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Wow, you almost got me crying! This is a beautiful and sad story. I wrote an original fic that I think si the same, sad and beautifully written...I'm biased though, you can find it on fictionpress, let me know
Just to wet your appetite here's an excerpt:
"...Sitting here in the street with you in my arms. Liquid rubies stain the asphalt as lights flash all around, every one reflects off the pool that slowly creeps across the ground in a twisted version of light playing off water..."
No, I didn't plan on advertising my work, but since it's all typed out...I'm too lazy to delete it :P
| krazycaty3 chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
omg, i'm crying..it was so good!
| flika chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
That is so beautiful. you made me cry. i just love it
| Miss N. Tonks chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Thats the first chase/cameron story ever to make me cry, and ive read a lot. well done that was beautiful and sad and in a strange way i loved it. your a really good writer.
| McJoJo chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
Oh my God, Beautiful story, even made me cry.
| DanniHavok chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
ahh im in tears! that was so sad poor chase :(...danni
| blurd-vision chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
oh that's sad. :( the ending though the last paragraph EXCELLENT! my best compliments to the author. happy smile.
JESUS LOVES YOU!
| Ava chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
As sad as it is, I love it. Please keep up the amazing work.
| Heather1021 chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
beautifully written. you did a great job.
p.s. i didn't feel like logging in. sorry.
| HPgirl7 chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
that's soo sad! Why must Chase suffer so much lost? But it was a very good story. Very well written. you should make more.
| jdcocoagirl chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
gosh heavy drama its so heartbreaking... and well written to.