Reviews for An Alternate Ending
Seiji and Shizuku 4ever chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
This was soo cute! Way to stay true with Jiraiya and Tsunade, it was nice to see more of them as teens. Awesome characterization and sweet overtone!
alliwant chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
omg! i totally get it! the hero and heroine that tsunade was talking about was her and jiraiya! rite? this was awesome! loved how u did the whole 'so predictable' thing and it relates to them!
encyser chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
Ah, the irony. This story's loaded with it! Ha-yeah!
WonderBat chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
Dan's still here! Cool! Haha!
Artemis 85 chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
lolz awesome! go you old pervy sage! kewl story!
cherrysmex23 chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
Awesome pairing. I love the story.
Trunksmybaby chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
that was too cute.
random ID chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
Porn as a parallel for life?

it's great in that it's deeper than it first appears