Reviews for Naruto of the Shikon
Guest chapter 29 . 7/1
I don't think nigen is even a real word in any language the word your looking for is ningen which means human
Guest chapter 26 . 7/1
Guest chapter 23 . 7/1
Its fuuton: rasenshuriken
Guest chapter 22 . 7/1
Who the help is gamagichi? I think you mean gamakichi
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1
Make it naruto/sango/kagura/midori
Guest chapter 5 . 6/24
A so-so story. Not particularly engaging and meant for people who know BOTH Naruto and Inuyasha. Unfortunately on Fanfiction that isn't always the case. Take more interest in detail and grammar. Your spelling is at a fourth grade level. (Though I'm inclined to ask if English is your primary language?) It's passable though. Your actual story is above average though. The writing is a tad dodgy and the storyline is unusual but decently made. I suggest you write as if you were telling this story to a moron who has no idea what Naruto or Inuyasha are. As it is (I never go into the latter) I have no clue who is who. The only characters with any identifiable personality at this point are Naruto (though cliche), Inuyasha (though he's very one-sided from what I've seen) and Kaede (a good character portrayal for an amateur). I'll keep reading though. It has me interested but you could do much better with this. I hope to see improvement in later chapters. (Use a damn word correcting tool for tit's sake at least.)
luckmaster1 chapter 42 . 6/16
What's the sequel to Naruto of the Shikon
The Prophet Of Lies chapter 13 . 6/14
God this naruto is so oc and random God mode but wonder how you will take it to much to quit yet
FallenLucifersAngel chapter 27 . 6/2
Loner Kid chapter 1 . 5/11
it's asuma not azuma
KaeterinaRomanov chapter 42 . 2/16
i absolutely loved your story! it was a great read.
Guest chapter 26 . 2/13
naru X kyuu
sage chapter 1 . 1/20
Naruto kagome and naruto sango
Pokedomo555 chapter 42 . 1/13
I loved this story but I cannot find the sequel. I was wondering if you planned to put it up and if not, explain why because I do not want this to end up without a sequel, to much potential and greatness for that
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
im hoping for Midoriko or Kikyo
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