Reviews for Between The Lines
Switchback chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Wow, I loved this. It had me smiling from all the Balthier and Fran interaction that I can't stop now, seriously. I really hope that you write more on this because it has good potential, especially how you kept them in character so well. Anyway, hope you continue this and this is one of the best Balthier/Fran fics out there.

Oh yeah, I laughed at the Moogle bringing in the tray. I could imagine perfectly Balthier shooing one out with a crutch.

talholuvr chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
DUDE YOU NEED TO WRITE A NEW CHAPTER FOR THIS :P...your writing is really good and there are not many Fran Balthier fanfics out there and your is by far the best...So keep it up :P
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
oh they're so cute!

and balthier was so honorable to let fran have the bed to herself LOL

no..he may be a lady's man but he'd never sneak himself a grope or two _
Violet's Veil chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
I'm jealous of you seriously! Lovely lovely lovely!
Oro4 chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
no kissy? You were so close! honestly! good job! I really like it! Bathier and Fran really are the bestest couple
Ryfee chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
ah poor balthier D:

he must be feeling VERY uncomfortable for sleeping like that xDD;;

i mean, gee, three months! o_o;

tho, i must admit, three months seem too long.

anyways, this is a nice piece of work.

i liked the balfran-ness (:

they were in character n_n

please write more soon ~

MCHLV; 3 felia.
mandy chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
Beautiful writing. I hope to see more.
Arisa chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
I love your work to pieces. Beautifully done.