Reviews for Hallowed Spirits
Lazov chapter 6 . 2/7/2014
Fuck. Despite how poorly structured this whole thing was, I enjoyed reading it.

Shame it's left abandoned.
Hyloch chapter 6 . 4/9/2012
I would love to see more of this.
To daemon chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I haven't read this story, but on seeing your review I had to laugh a little. There's someone out there who will "shag" anything. Rule 64, I think it was. If you can think of it, there's porn of it. I still don't get why anyone would find predators in pred v alien to be sexy but apparently for some the well-muscled chest counteracts the fact they have a scary-ass face.
ArcaneMaverick chapter 6 . 1/27/2012
If this is the real end. You should mark it as complete. If it is not, then you're a failure anyway.
ArcaneMaverick chapter 4 . 1/27/2012
This isn't going anywhere. Why is he going to Hogwarts? Decent enough writing though.
ArcaneMaverick chapter 3 . 1/27/2012
The reasoning for Harry not being safe in the muggle world and that he should instead head to Hogwarts is very poor if not downright dumb and not thought out.
ArcaneMaverick chapter 2 . 1/27/2012
Interesting build up, but since I don't know what Harry's motivation is, I don't care yet. I read only to see if there will be a plot.
ArcaneMaverick chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Lester and Harold...those are just horribly ugly names...
Shirley chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Are most of the reviewers fuck trades or something? This story is obviously au so things are going to be different and yet you get people saying 'goldsmith did not attack till halloween' this is his story and thus should make changes to canon otherwise he would simply be a copy cat of jkr and I myself would not have bothered to read it then.

Please think of what your writing before you review. If you want the story to be better leave ideas that could be usable instead of useless crap

Thanks shirley
heavyarms3111 chapter 6 . 7/25/2010
Just found this story while going through various odd couples and this one is very very good, are you planning on continueing?
Forever Rahhel chapter 6 . 11/24/2009
Very interesting. Never saw a story with Romilda being interesting. In my opinion there is not much difference between her and Ginny. Both had about the same screen time up to book 6.

Too bad you don't seem to update anymore.
daemon chapter 3 . 9/4/2009
Again another chapter of your faggot mary sue Lester Potter and still don't know where Harry learn anything. I advice you to stop this and just don't write again until you think a bit more before writing this kind of useless shit
daemon chapter 2 . 9/4/2009
Harry is a fucking ugly monster with barely any decent education. Meanwhile his brother (whose abilities scream Mary sue) have a good education and great skills, not matter how arrogant he is. I can tell you right now that no sane woman would shag that monster and if that wasn't enough your writing style is annoying and just plain FAIL
superninjamonkey chapter 6 . 5/25/2009
Great story, though it looks like its abandoned. Such is life.
ze frech suck chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
Voldemort didn't attack the Potters until Halloween. That's months after Harry's birth.
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