Reviews for Chronicles: Otherworld
Phoenix Skyborne chapter 9 . 1/12/2007
Rilian really shouldn't be so trusting...
The Eromancer chapter 8 . 1/10/2007
and this is where one would say: oh shit
Phoenix Skyborne chapter 8 . 1/9/2007
You did great with the battle scene. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Kealakai chapter 7 . 1/6/2007
The sacrifice is what I'm thinking is Ascord he's worthy (he's been in most mission, they made a big deal out of how he killed a matron mother) he's probably gonna get sacrificed Rilian will go into a rage and him & Tak flee the Underdark together.

So Update soon!
Sun-Tzu Liao 3r chapter 6 . 1/5/2007
I like Tak when she gets all arrogant and stuff. she might seem like a sweet little girl outside but inside shes spiteful, plotting, twisted and cruel. any drow parent would be proud :)
Sun-Tzu Liao 3r chapter 3 . 1/5/2007
I enjoyed the way Rilian was more worried for himself than the child. that seemed pretty drowlike.
Phoenix Skyborne chapter 7 . 1/5/2007
_

Tak loves Rilian.
Phoenix Skyborne chapter 6 . 1/2/2007
I bet the sacrifice is Rilian. I hope it's not successful. I like him.
Phoenix Skyborne chapter 5 . 12/29/2006
To the surface? I imagine Tak is going to find a way to tag along...

Can't wait for more! _
GrimmZ chapter 5 . 12/29/2006
yow it's a Jarlaxle wannabe! I was hoping "The Mercenary" would be Dinin or Enialis :(
Kealakai chapter 4 . 12/25/2006
Awesone Chapter! Update soon!
Phoenix Skyborne chapter 4 . 12/25/2006
This is going great! Each chapter just keeps getting better!
The Eromancer chapter 3 . 12/22/2006
ah denile is the friend of everyone! Hm, he should learn this fraze: "There is no innocence, only degreas of guilt."
Kealakai chapter 3 . 12/22/2006
Great Chapter you capture Rillian's emotions so well! Great Chapter!
The Eromancer chapter 2 . 12/16/2006
YAH! the next "book" is up!

but where's Tak?
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