|Reviews for 12 Days of Contestshipping|
| TrinityAngelX chapter 3 . 9/22/2007
| WemOfHyperLeaf chapter 3 . 8/13/2007
Awsome! Pleaz update!
| Ray by Another Name chapter 3 . 7/9/2007
Great story, very inspiring.
| mew-rockz chapter 3 . 6/4/2007
continue the story it's really nice
| Theater Of The Mind chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
i did not like it i loved it even though christmas is over well when i read it
| skittleysweet chapter 3 . 3/18/2007
loved it and cant wait till chjaptrer4 !
| flamesoul chapter 3 . 3/11/2007
| Maianot real name chapter 3 . 2/23/2007
Like, why didn't you continue the story? 'Cuz Christmas is over? C'mon please continue this I really really like it.
4/5 is my rating 'cuz you made a cliffhanger. NO!
| CabiidO chapter 3 . 2/17/2007
hey update soon please! :D
| Erizibang chapter 3 . 1/18/2007
LOL christmas is gone and I'm still reading this :D... just wondering are you gonna continue this?
| Ray Ray chapter 3 . 1/15/2007
OMG! This is so awesome, the battling scene was pretty good as well, long but good. May and Drew are totally in character, it's what makes this fic even better, PLEASE continue. PLEASE! ;-;
| pokemon-finatic chapter 3 . 12/29/2006
cool story! update soon please :)
| romancerox chapter 3 . 12/19/2006
this chapter was a little boring because there wasnt really any plot. i like the story in general, hope you update soon!
| Mafuyu no Nagareboshi chapter 3 . 12/18/2006
BEEP BEEP! An English error detected! BEEP BEEP!
-“What advice?” May cried. “You’re insulting and critical assistance?”-
Supposed to be "your insulting and critical assistance?", than "you're". You're is just you are and your is possessive whatever thing, lol.
| Mafuyu no Nagareboshi chapter 2 . 12/18/2006
Ooh.. I recalled my password here. ) But that was a nice chapter, though FFN made it seemed as though the details for the battle was brief, but it was still pretty good. I'm not that good with better constructive criticism, but maybe less usage of it's, albeit I don't have any other alternatives to use.
Also, though this may put it at an OOC disadvantage, Squirtle can own Flygon and Butterfree, and even Roselia with Blizzard, let alone Ice Beam. Then same to Skitty. BUT, this is just my types advantages and disadvantages side speaking. I guess I'd normally get upset when one has a type advantage and not use it in a battle, even in anime/fics, lol.
But a nice chapter nonetheless. )