|Reviews for 12 Days of Contestshipping|
| Mafuyu no Nagareboshi chapter 3 . 12/18/2006
BEEP BEEP! An English error detected! BEEP BEEP!
-“What advice?” May cried. “You’re insulting and critical assistance?”-
Supposed to be "your insulting and critical assistance?", than "you're". You're is just you are and your is possessive whatever thing, lol.
| Mafuyu no Nagareboshi chapter 2 . 12/18/2006
Ooh.. I recalled my password here. ) But that was a nice chapter, though FFN made it seemed as though the details for the battle was brief, but it was still pretty good. I'm not that good with better constructive criticism, but maybe less usage of it's, albeit I don't have any other alternatives to use.
Also, though this may put it at an OOC disadvantage, Squirtle can own Flygon and Butterfree, and even Roselia with Blizzard, let alone Ice Beam. Then same to Skitty. BUT, this is just my types advantages and disadvantages side speaking. I guess I'd normally get upset when one has a type advantage and not use it in a battle, even in anime/fics, lol.
But a nice chapter nonetheless. )
| Haleie chapter 3 . 12/17/2006
omg, for once someone acctually kept these Characters in well, character(no offence to anyone else). I really enjoy your story. I cant wait for more .
| Purishira chapter 3 . 12/17/2006
kyah! this story is so cute X3 I luv it! D
update soon X3 *much love* XD
| Suwamoto chapter 2 . 12/17/2006
Your FF is really cute. I like it
I love Contestshipping FFs.
| IKSR chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
lvoe it ! update asap