|Reviews for 30 Pieces|
| baited with hypotheses chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
| Rosawyn chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
I think one of the most intriguing aspetcs of Smellerbee and Longshot's relationship is how they have grown up together, both orphans with no parents or other adults watching over them. Jet doesn't count, since he's barely older than Longshot.
"Her first love was when she was still a girl, but not so little, and she didn't know everything, but she did know him, and that was enough." My fav line is this. :)
| ragtime tune chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
About three and a half years too late, this is still gorgeous in the beyond-words sort of way.
| requim17 chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
oo it was spooky there at the end ;P. for awhile i thought u were telling a story in segements. but then when jet was alive and then dead again i was like. o nvm. haha. but i still liked it. how u mixed in humor and angst. just like the show. i think my fav was 'game' it just amuses me to see one girl whoop every single guy's ass ;P
| CultOfStrawberry chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
| Outsane chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Ugh, fabulous as usual. The first 10 or so were my favorites, but they were all gorgeous, of course. Geez, when DON'T you write something pretty? And of course, Bath was adorable. XD
| Wudelfin chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
30 was the best
| watchfob chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
*grins* lyke, i totly luv it!
Momo: Das ist gut, ja!
Me: My favorites were 26 and 30.
| Random Stuff About Stuff chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
That's so sad! And sweet. And funny...
Really great. Just great.
| songbird300038 chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
This is cute!
I like it
| Supergirrl chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Nice. I like Longerbee.
| The Blind Bandit chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
(count this as review for Eternal Dance as well, please.)
Your writing is the sort that makes one stop immediatly when scrolling down the page. There might be something terribly interesting beneath the story, but you click the other instead.
That, my friend, is what shows a worthwile story and a deserving author.
(Hi there. I'm Smellerbee, and please don't make me kill you.)
Best. Line. EVER.