|Reviews for Home|
| XxLotusxX chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
Such cuteness! I likey, and it's good writing.
| Rusty'sTechGirl chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
I quite enjoyed the story. A fine job I would say.
| YonderTiger chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
I liked this. It's not often I find a story with Rin thinking so intellegently. It's a refreshing change. *nod nod*
Grammar and spelling, I noticed were pretty good. I noticed barely any mistakes, if any.
I noticed something too... you mentioned Sesshomaru in the story, but you didn't actually add him into it. Did you do that one purpose, or was it accidental? Either way, I liked it... how you showed Rin thinking about him without him actually being there.
This was a cute story. Two thumbs up!