Reviews for Ghost
wolfrain567 chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
The Lovely Decline chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
Sometimes I strike out when I think I find an amazing author, but that's certainly not the case when it comes to you.

This definetly was not a failure, and it was great, and I could tell it was a line by line thing, but I still loved it.

Keep it up.

I wonder if you have a beta though. A couple grammatical errors, nothing major.

Still great.
mani-g chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
interesting style.. no actual dialogue.. makes a unique effect.

short and sweet.. very subtle.. makes it all the more compelling.

lovely, very lovely..
suzako chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
you're a great autor, really *_* I've read all your narusaku fics, and appreciated them all_ Keep on the good work! I love angsty stories, yay! )
une valentine chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
I liked it. xD
Tigerrelly chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Wow. Really moving. Nicely done. Sweet, sad and all that fun stuff. hehe. Hope to see more like it! :)
Hououza chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Beautiful story.

Interesting how you used the word ghost in that piece, at first I was uncertain of the inference, but as it drew out you showed how in the 'ghost' continued to stay with them and complete the little circle of their team. Then at the same time looking at their relationship with him gone, and the future of their unborn child.

Very nice.

Good luck & best wishes,

Richforce chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Nice job