Reviews for Alone I Break
azerjaban chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
nicley thought out inner dialog.
hdasjhfuqry29 chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Brilliant. Alot of people focus on the uppity, eclectic Veronica with all her sarcastic quirks and her given keenness on all things obscure and they almost always tend to forget the very reason why she turned out this way. There is a reason why Veronica is so awfully guarded with her snark and her constant vitality. The reason is her mother, Lilly, Duncan, and now it seems, Logan.

This was so abrupt and distorted and heartbraking and raw in such an acutely cutting way that, by the time I reached the end, it gave me tingles.

As hard as the lively, prickly Veronica is to nail, I would imagine that the gloomy, shattered Veronica is even harder and you pulled it all of wonderfully! Again, brilliant job!
GeneticallyEnhanced1 chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Aw, that was well written and very sad. That girl's really been through hell and back. I love how complex and tortured she is and your story really nailed that. :)