Reviews for Cherrypicked
fantasy universe chapter 1 . 3/14
I can't believe this story has only 27 reviews. It's sad because it's one of the best stories I've found so far.

Not only did you get their first time in a realistic situation, but also you managed to get their characters close to their personalities in canon.

I thoroughly enjoyed it from the very begining until the end.
Amazing job!
Great chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
This doesn't have enough reviews to encourage people to read. I think this was well done and humorous in the sense that we all had a first time and it never goes the way we expect. You handled the characters well, keeping them pretty true to expected personality. BUT what I really liked, what I really appreciated, was that it wasn't some freaking porno fiction. Yes, sex is important to a relationship, but for some reason, too many people feel they have to give a play-by-play including measurements and everything else! I found it ironic that Rukia, for all practical purposes, is just as unfamiliar with sex as the virgin Ichigo. That was deft and left me feeling they more connected in there interactions than either realized. So: Praise for a good story. Praise for correct and creative syntax. Praise for grammar and spelling. Because of those three things, I have to now see what else you might have written, as it's hard to find a polished story on this site. Thanks for the read! jsm
jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
That was beautifully awkward. And it even managed to have a plot twist, haha. Again, you're good at Rukia's noble manner.
Quickslice chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Oh my Gigai! (A fic from an amazing author, Uchihan-san, borrowed it from her) I was laughing hard!
purplepam chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
HIlarious! I loved it! Yumichika and Ikkaku?! LOL! I loved the ending!
"Shut up, Rukia."

She did.

But not for long.
Hahahah! Great job!
zunaira ghazal chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
lol, dysfunctional. just the way they're supposed to be :D and ikkaku and yumichika? LOL that made my day :D
paigeydoll chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Aww great fic :) Ichigo and Rukia are so cute together.

And I really like the fact that you didn't make Rukia a naive virgin. While it is cute to think of Rukia and Ichigo only being with each other, Rukia is a lot older and no doubt has experienced many things Ichigo hasn't. It makes sense really.

Anyway, great ending :) I really love the way you write. I would laugh my head off if Byakuya actually caught wind of what was being planned or if he even walked in on them one day. It would be priceless!
Jamie chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
I love this.

Rukia and her surprise, Ichigo's naivete, and the hilarious awkwardness of the whole situation was simply epic.

I didn't know whether to laugh, smile, or raise my eyebrows at these crazy kids' (yes, by kids I also mean Rukia and the other Shinigami) antics.

My favorite character in this is probably Renji. Hahah! I just love how blunt he is and straight to the point.

Great job! Everything about this is hilarious!
carthae chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Very interesting and credible first time.

I would have liked to see more of Byakuya's reaction to their relationship, though...
EternalDementia5 chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Fantastic fic! Loved it!
Prizz chapter 1 . 4/6/2010

That's the only word I can think of at the moment. :))
ElfishScallywag chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
So CUTE! Lovely little story, very realistic and had me giggling a lot. I just adore Ichigo and "Maybe he should have bought flowers after all." makes me squeal. Nice job!
staidwaters chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
how utterly realistic. and sweet. (happy grin)
lavaloner chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
The ending was funny, the beginning was interesting, and the middle was damn erotic. :D

Woo, go people who run sex hotels!

This was a good story, and you're a good author. There, I said it.
Strumwulf chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Nice Ichigo and Rukia story. I like how you built up their relationship.
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