|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Unexpected Visitor|
| teh blumchenkinder chapter 4 . 5/10/2008
I think you did a decent job at writing Sirius's bit... eh. Not *omgamazorzinz* ... but hey, not all of us can be that awesome. I'll review more tomorrow... 'cuz right now I can barely see the screen.
| teh blumchenkinder chapter 3 . 5/10/2008
The dog shook his head while barking twice.
*blink* that's an interesting wrinkle...
Mrs. Figg giggled
o_o also ominous, but in an entirely different way than before.
"Whoops, sorry, Professor, I didn't mean to…"
ah. (thank you for the image of a shirtless Remus)
seemed to not have clothes on the rest of her body
omg ack! (lol, "poor" Harry!)
took his wand out and flicked it towards
yay! easy fix!
something you will discover soon
ooh... did Ron follow thru on his threat(s)?
sceptical is spelled skeptical.
Tonks, who was an absolute disaster at house-working
lol, I can imagine! *shudder*
Hee, apparently Madame Black only needed a severe threat...
| teh blumchenkinder chapter 2 . 5/10/2008
heeheehee, I'm just glad I don't have to wait for the update! XD
Quaero Amoris Anima Charm
eew. So gross and fluffy... *sigh*
woken- I think it might be "awake," instead.
Ron started to wake up, muttering "Er-my-nee" under his breath.
"If you have Hermione's wand here, could you give it to me?"
Um... that and *she'll need it!*
a bad taste
huh. Maybe it's cuz when Dumbles tried it, he didn't have one? lolz. I have several other theories, but I shan't bore you with them...
And dang, that ending was sappy! (d'aww...)
| teh blumchenkinder chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
...sitting in his father's chair
I enjoy that you paint Draco as something more than a twat; thank you. He's actually human: he's concerned for his mother, he listens in on conversations, he's actually polite... and so forth.
I also enjoy that this story seems to be progressing quickly, but isn't frenetic or spotty with the details (or grammar).
He instead felt attracted to...
oh, that's not ominous or mysterious *at all*, nosireebob... /sarcasm
You... you evil-cliffie-leaving fiend!
| ChocoholicWriter chapter 21 . 4/28/2008
Please Please Please update soon - I am loving this fic!
| Dustin Ambrollo chapter 21 . 4/6/2008
You know if you took off the restriction to anonymous reviews then you would have a lot more...
May you be blessed with many updates starting with the one your gonna post in the next 24 hours please cuz i wanna read more about this story its funny romantic and overall the best harry potter fan fic ive read not including Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past by S'TarKan who i am still waiting to update that one... *starts crying*
| The-Resident chapter 21 . 3/30/2008
Just a note from one of the 'older' fans. 'I'm a Believer' was written and composed by Neil Diamond and first performed by the Monkees in 1967. The a cute chapter and a nice respite between the war's battles.
| hawkeye1958 chapter 7 . 3/30/2008
Anoterh good chapter, keep on writing!
| hawkeye1958 chapter 6 . 3/30/2008
Cool! So Harry ancestors are the 4 founders of hogwarts!
Keep on writing!
| hawkeye1958 chapter 5 . 3/30/2008
Another good chapter. Keep on writing. Has anyone send you a better drawing of the crest? And where is your drawing located?
Which website? Cheers!
| hawkeye1958 chapter 4 . 3/30/2008
Another good chapter, keep on writing!
| hawkeye1958 chapter 3 . 3/30/2008
Good chapter, keep on writing!
| hawkeye1958 chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
Good story so far. You might want to go back later and do some spell(spelling) checks. Just a suggestion!
| David Fishwick chapter 21 . 3/24/2008
Nice story please update soon.
| Babydoodles89 chapter 21 . 3/21/2008