|Reviews for again,not really|
| frytrix chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Pff, constructive critism, alright.
Naruto and kyuubi merge to become one being: acceptable and can possible see it working out.
Possibly sending Naruto back in time to make some changes or cause chaos, sure go ahead everyone would love to see that happen as long it is somewhat orginal.
Naruto telling others he is from the future, and using some sort of mind control, or possible genjutsu to show what has happened to make them belive him... "YOU FAIL.."
Firstly, he will come of as insane, secoundly they will think he is a spy wich is trying to manipulate them.
You would have been better of making a new identity for him, with a somewhat beliveable background. The story will most likely go downhill from here.
| crossman456 chapter 4 . 7/6/2012
Kai/Kurenai and Naruto/Natsume Aya
| ILoveCocoaCookies chapter 4 . 11/10/2011
naruto/ino and kai/hana and keep typing this story please
| Crystalzap chapter 4 . 3/7/2011
not bad, too bad it's not being finished :(
| poupou02 chapter 4 . 1/26/2010
wow that's new for me in the time-traveling kind of fic nice please continu
| Attrition chapter 4 . 10/31/2009
vote: no one
| UndeadTech-TS chapter 4 . 6/21/2009
hey love this story so far, quick question can kai have kurenai, anko and tsunami, i really like all three of thoes girls, it's just to hard to deside. and pluse it would be better for everyone, everyone would like to see kai have four girls, as for naruto i would have to say ino and hinata all the way, no way in hell is sakura going to be the one, i hate her big time, any way i hope you can do that with kai, peace out friend.
| PeinVPuppy chapter 4 . 1/19/2009
if i can still vote i vote for Kai: Tsunami and Naruto: Natsume Aya P.S love your story's update soon pls
| rexr chapter 4 . 11/3/2008
for the polls it should be Kurenai and Natsume Aya
| Pi3 chapter 4 . 10/8/2008
Kai/Anko and Naruto/Hinata
| Cuervo Blanco chapter 4 . 9/18/2008
im accord with the Kai/Shizune but if that doesnt work a Kai/Anko sounds interesting at least.
im totally devoted to a Naru/Hina... but if that can work i would like a Naru/FemHaku (that is wrth a shot)
| pleasedeletemyffaccount chapter 4 . 9/12/2008
Kai/Kurenai and Naruto/Ino
| Nikorasu Za Shugotenshi chapter 4 . 9/8/2008
| Nikorasu Za Shugotenshi chapter 3 . 9/8/2008
| Nikorasu Za Shugotenshi chapter 2 . 9/8/2008