|Reviews for Approaching Intelligence|
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Good points: Not crappy. Witty lines
Bad points: You gave out too much on the summary. When I read it, I already know what will happen. Too short. And I’m a feminist, I prefer Tokiya being embarrassed. Well, that’s personal, so that won’t count.
P.S: I'm twelve too. (or a least you were twelve too when you wrote this) Let's raise the flagof twelve year olds! Woohoo!
| Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
| tangLaw chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
this is really funny! i especially like fuuko's comeback on the last part of the fic...but i have to say that michan was really mean to her...and over one frigging map too! he should have looked on the bright side of things...at least they're together...right? oh, well, i guess michan's not really known for his optimism...hehehehe...i hope you will write more stories...ganbatte!
| disneyprincezes chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
heht! nice fic!
| malas-chan chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
! Lolz! I was laughing my head off when Fuuko said, "They're my in-laws." Nice fic! Keep it up.
| Yamada Umeko chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
great story! I was laughing all throughout! I loved it, especially the last part, when Fuuko said "they're my in-laws" )
anyway, hope to see you soon with another fic! keep it up! )
| rubix-girl chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
hi! i lyk ur fic... its funny... lolz! i dunno wat to say eh... hehe... la lang... im looking forward sa next fic mo...hehe... its tofuu dba? hehe... i wanna read it na...ur posting it tomorrow ryt? hehe... faster so i can read it b4 i go out of town...niwei, bye 4 now... :) (puno ng hehe review ko...)
| yuki kawaii chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
wow, interesting. do continue.
why did you stop your other fic? it's the one with fuuko recalling what happened between them in her diary entries, right? aww.. i don't think it was terrible.. :(
anyway, good luck with this one! God bless. :)
- yuki ;) -
| puppet and clown chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
cool! i love it!
i wanna read more of it soon.
| elven-faerie.aerowin chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
so you're a twelve year old too? good story do continue...
| Shenhui chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
Cute... I wonder where this is going...