Reviews for Safe
Raven.Blacke chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Well...your much better than me! I suck at being edward!
horsie890 chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
I think it's good. I got a little confused, but I think it's because of my short attention span.
AnAerialView chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
Not the greatest? I haven't read this scene from Edward's point of view before this certain piece, but I really like it. I think that yu should have put in something about how he really adored her( I don't think he loved her then), not just how he was practically intoxicated and infatuated. But still, it's a very touching piece! Good job.
tubachick12379 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Very nice! I agree that it is hard to think about Edward's perspective. The only thing that I would change in this story is the part where he says that he knows that "many female humans" love his crooked smile. I don't really think that he knows how attractive he is to people... But I did really like this story!
Twilightbells chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
This is so good!

I never really thought about the situation from Edward's perspective.
Amiiix3 chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
OHMYGOSH! that was wonderful!

ugh i can't WAIT for midnight sun!

keep it up.