|Reviews for Whumped|
| Khentkawes chapter 6 . 9/15/2007
hm... I'm behind on my reading and reviewing.
Interesting chapter. And yes, that get well card was really creepy. I'm sure it will be important later on. And I imagine the departmental bickering will play an important role as well. I have to admit, I like the way you deal with some of the day-to-day trivialities that the show never has time for. Of course these people still have paper-work to do, and Jack has e-mails to deal with, and minor personnel conflicts arise. I find it fascinating to see how they deal with those "normal" issues. But maybe I'm easily fascinated.
On a similar note, I've always liked the way you let the minor characters have distinct personalities. People like Rothman, Balinsky, and Tolliver... you develop them just enough to be believable without adding unnecessary details. So in the end, I find your little office politics plausible. And amusing.
| chiclete chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
Please continue the story... :(
| Stargate Fan chapter 6 . 9/10/2007
This is very well written and an intriguing story. I'm hooked!
| numom1 chapter 6 . 9/9/2007
As usual I'm left wanting more. I really enjoy watching Jack track down the problem with the Records Department and slowly watching it get into shape so it doesn't cause Daniel any future problems. Also, I love, love how you make Daniel's recovery more realistic, ie. taking a while. Most stories tend to gloss over how long it takes for someone to recover from a major illness and I just don't find that realistic at all. So I applaud you in your efforts.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
| forestwife chapter 6 . 9/8/2007
*shivers* that IS creepy...
| bluedragon1836 chapter 6 . 9/7/2007
sometimes the things that don't seem a threat are the things that kill you.
| chiclete chapter 6 . 9/7/2007
Really good! Please update soon :)
| Eilidh17 chapter 6 . 9/7/2007
...and the plot thickens! Great story
| mtee1958 chapter 6 . 9/7/2007
| Cleo the Muse chapter 6 . 9/7/2007
To quote Alice, "Curiouser and curiouser."
| E. Nagrom chapter 6 . 9/7/2007
hey just found this...great mystery happening here! love "who dunnit's" keep up the great work
| Halfpastdead001 chapter 6 . 9/7/2007
love this fic im hooked keep writting it i wanna knw whats going to happen
| sarahmw42 chapter 6 . 9/6/2007
This is great! Please continue.
| Nighshae chapter 6 . 9/6/2007
Oh, goodie, your writer's block finally got unjammed... :D Great chapter, looking forward to the next one! (On either story, mind you. :D)
(Now, if I could only manage to do the same... :( )
| correo chapter 5 . 8/30/2007
I'm really enjoying your story. Please continue...