Reviews for Jealousy
AmutoStAr7 chapter 2 . 7/21
Review for chapter 1:

This chapter is great, the story line is great and the concept is great. The only thing is very minor grammatical errors in some areas but they can be fixed with some minor adjustments. I advise that you read over the chapter in detail and you may be able to correct the errors. This isn't a flame, just mere constructive criticism. Ja!

Review for chapter 2:

I was actually surprised to note no errors in this one. Good chapter! Although your chapters are quite short they still have this sense of... fullness... to it. I believe that's because thankfully you don't leave us on a cliffhanger xD

Excuse the double review. I tried reviewing on chapter one but it turns out I already have.
AmutoStAr7 chapter 3 . 2/26/2014
so... no relationship?
AmutoStAr7 chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
good, good. but shouldnt shika have been a tiny bit more... shika?
Guest chapter 3 . 6/12/2013
Wow.. Sakura is smart...poor sasuke-though it is actually hilarious... well thanks for the story! It was fun!
White Acer chapter 2 . 4/13/2013
Wow.. Sakura is smart...poor sasuke-though it is actually hilarious... well thanks for the story! It was fun!
White Acer chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
aww.. poor sasuke.. his life is so busy... haha.. I like it!
lovehurtsme67 chapter 3 . 3/27/2013
End like end END?! This is a great story why end it with a cliffhanger?! Love the story
White Acer chapter 3 . 1/12/2013
I love this... hehe...jealous sasuke is cute and oblivious sakura is cute too...thank you for writing this
S-angelwings-S chapter 3 . 9/3/2010
Good ending. i liked the twist where she was going to meet Hinata instead, and Sasuke feels all stupid for assuming she liked the Hyuuga. That was really funny!
S-angelwings-S chapter 2 . 9/3/2010
great writing, sasuke is totally in character, and i loved every bit of it! Especially where sai appears; it's so funny when Sasuke says that Sai was an idiot, and yet people compared him to Sasuke. Lol
S-angelwings-S chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Haha Sasuke is so funny when he's all jealous over Sakura! Great writing!
perpetuallyfangirling chapter 3 . 8/24/2009
cute! I just love stories of an over-protective/jealous Sasuke they're so darn cute! This was adorable! good job!
Traumaddict chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
I'm loving this story so far
Traumaddict chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
WoW

Never thought of Sasuke like that before

Great Story so far
crystalwolfberri chapter 3 . 6/28/2009
haha this whole fic was adorable. :)
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