Reviews for The Rise to Power: Mush and Goombrawl
burningdragon26 chapter 7 . 9/20/2010
Now we're talking! The Glitz Pit fighting tournament is about to get underway! Next chapter, please!
Mog Anarchy chapter 5 . 1/9/2007
Okie dokie; another review!

I liked this chapter more than your previous. :)

Violence and gore - gotta love it.

Yeah... As my partner LG stated, you've read Fire Of Glory, huh? Hee hee. Yay, I feel special, something I wrote (And LG wrote too) inspired a fellow author. Wo!


- Dixie Stonehall. x x x
Mog Anarchy chapter 4 . 1/9/2007
Oh, a cliffy, eh? :)

Well, here's my review:

Dialogue - Fits well with the character's personalities; however, is occaisonally bland in places.

Description - Slightly sparse, but fits your style well.

The use of the cliffhanger was a great touch, and your characters seem realistic and loveable. Nice work. :)

- Dixie Stonehall. x x x
LuigiGirl-22 chapter 3 . 1/4/2007
Heh, I've got this random feeling inside me that you've been reading Fire of Glory...Hmm...

But anyways, awesome chapter, and such.

Keep this awesome work up!

LuigiGirl-22 chapter 2 . 1/4/2007
Oh Geez...Talk about emotional. :)

Heh, keep this up! I'm liking it more and more!

Not much to say, again, keep this up! It's getting better!

LuigiGirl-22 chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Awesome start here, nice work.

Not much to say here, but...Keep it up.

Looks like a good fic, in my opinion!

LuigiGirl-22 chapter 5 . 1/4/2007
Oh no...Not the dagger...ANYTHING BUT THE DAGGER!

Heh, sorry, for some odd reason, I think you've read 'Fire of Glory' :)

But anyways, good chapter, keep up the good work, alrighty?

Mog Anarchy chapter 3 . 12/20/2006
Heh, a reasonable fight scene, I'd say.

A tip for fight scenes: Describe actions more intently, and slow down the pace to keep the tension running.

You don't have to take my advice, I'm just trying to be helpful. :)


- Dixie Stonehall. x x x
Mog Anarchy chapter 2 . 12/20/2006
Oh, it's set in the past.

I've only just realised - boy I'm slow. :)

This chapter seemed a lot shorter than the last - but I prefer stories with varying chapter lengths.

Another great chapter, with cool dialogue and realistic character personalities.

Good work. :)

- Dixie Stonehall. x x x
Mog Anarchy chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
This sounds like a pretty interesting concept. I love stories based on the events of Glitzville.

It's my favourite part of TTYD too.

The cursing adds a nice touch. I'm a swearing addict, and it's rare to find fics with a lot in the first chapter. Hee hee, yay for bad words!

The characterisation techniques are pretty authentic too, along with your descriptions - they all tie in very well with each other.

- Dixie Stonehall. x x x