Reviews for Cartwheel
mad100141 chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
I like it. Can't stop smiling. And at the perfect view of Luffys and Shanks relationship. When they meet again will it be obvious to both crews the depth of the relationship?
littlejune131 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
So sweet! I loved it!
Lyneel chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
very nice, made me smile at the end :)
Taisi chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I love Shanks. I was wondering what happened to Ben, though, I don't think I saw him... (doesn't know how far you've read)... er...

Anyway! This is just the type of thing I'd imagine Shanks would do, he's so sweet when it comes to Luffy. C:
Moon Ecstasy chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
That was not only sweet. It was awesome. It really fit with the characters and I could totally picture it happening.

So yeah, I loved it! Well worth the read!

Cheers!
Anyjen chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
This fic was so cute that now I'm going to need something sour (or possibly angsty) to balance it out. Great job! :3
Some Girl101 chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Hehe, that was cute! And creative too. Good job. .
LuffyxRuby chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
loved it!
Solo Loco Ellingson-Rose chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Heehee! I can DEFINITELY see that one happening! Nicely written, once again!
mihawklover chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
Oh bravo that was excellent! I really enjoyed the humour behind this story, it was well thought out _
Ai Tennshi chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
This was so sad at first... The opening line was my favorite.

The way that Ben looks on, reflecting, while he watches Luffy and Shanks was really touching.

I laughed out loud, though, at the end. I can see Shanks doing that-telling Luffy he can do something he really can't, just to cheer the boy up. Oh, that was hilarious. I hope he learned how to, or else he's in for it... *pauses* No, wait, probably not, since Luffy's easily distracted and very gullible.
Tutankhamun chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Oh dear God, this was so well done! I really loved it! I wanted to cry and laugh at the same time.
Chibi-fangurl56 chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Ah, I love it. Well done! You made my day with this!
TrunksgirlBlaze27 chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
lol, very good! Love how you did this! Well done, lol, I can just imagine Shanks actually trying to do a one handed cartwheel!
Shironami chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
hahaha! that was so funny, I loved the ending where he was trying to do carwheels! it was cute! I liked it!