Reviews for Paying the price
Morgan5318 chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Nicely, nicely done. It flows well, and really makes me want to read more about F'ren and Rahnis. Nice also to find a goldrider who isn't devastatingly beautiful, but is intelligent and clever. I would really like to see you turn this into a story about the size of DRAGON DAYS, but I also know this is a lot to ask of a writer. I will content myself with reading the one-shots, I guess. ::sigh::
so'mi chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
This is wonderfully written. The writing just flows naturally. I hope you continue with it.
GinaLee chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
This is a very interesting story - please continue!
Kitsuneko chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Shoot, now I REALLY want to see the outcome of Kiath's flight...

Wonderful piece, I'll have to go hunt down the prequel now. I know I've read it before, but I don't think I ever reviewed it.
Rimmersworld chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Hey , that was Terrific

I'm new at ff, but it was as in depth and intriging as an original.

Didn't read the original, but will look for it now.

Well done.
Kinkin chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
This is ONLY going to be a onshot? Shards. How about a two-shot? PLEASE? *big grin*