|Reviews for Paying the price|
| Morgan5318 chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Nicely, nicely done. It flows well, and really makes me want to read more about F'ren and Rahnis. Nice also to find a goldrider who isn't devastatingly beautiful, but is intelligent and clever. I would really like to see you turn this into a story about the size of DRAGON DAYS, but I also know this is a lot to ask of a writer. I will content myself with reading the one-shots, I guess. ::sigh::
| so'mi chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
This is wonderfully written. The writing just flows naturally. I hope you continue with it.
| GinaLee chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
This is a very interesting story - please continue!
| Kitsuneko chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Shoot, now I REALLY want to see the outcome of Kiath's flight...
Wonderful piece, I'll have to go hunt down the prequel now. I know I've read it before, but I don't think I ever reviewed it.
| Rimmersworld chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Hey , that was Terrific
I'm new at ff, but it was as in depth and intriging as an original.
Didn't read the original, but will look for it now.
| Kinkin chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
This is ONLY going to be a onshot? Shards. How about a two-shot? PLEASE? *big grin*