|Reviews for Being A Family|
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 6/4
aw cute :)
| Thranduil's wife chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
This story was touching, but way too short. Please write some more.
| sassyfriend chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Merry Christmas I really love this story
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
This is a good and warm hearted story. I like how Elrond comforted his son's when they lost their mothers. It was sad that the mothers left.
| krillball6 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
*sniff* So sweet! I love it!
| Nietta chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
This was a cute story, i liked the family you portray here. Good job!
| M chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Elladan and Elrohir do not know better than anyone: they did not lose their mother at an early age (as they were past 20 years when she left.) Elrond, on the other hand, did. Strange misuse of canon, that.
| sweet little aka kitsune-chan chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
aw that was so cute poor wittle estle though o well he is loved awesome fic koi
| IwishSan chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
aw. this is really touching.
happy holidays to you and have a great new year.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
No offense, but you need to get a different beta. You had a lot of mistakes in this short piece and the formatting was strange.
'This was no different for the inhalants of Rivendell.' Inhalants are things you breathe in through your nose. I think you mean 'inhabitants'.
'it was his son's Elladan and Elrohir'...You don't need an apostrophe-'It was his sons'.
Those are just a few examples. You also are in need of commas in several places as some of your sentences sound awkward without them.
It's a nice little one-shot, but again, the mistakes and formatting made it hard to read.