Reviews for Being A Family
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 6/4/2017
aw cute :)
Thranduil's wife chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
This story was touching, but way too short. Please write some more.
sassyfriend chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Merry Christmas I really love this story
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
This is a good and warm hearted story. I like how Elrond comforted his son's when they lost their mothers. It was sad that the mothers left.
krillball6 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
*sniff* So sweet! I love it!


Nietta chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
This was a cute story, i liked the family you portray here. Good job!
M chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Elladan and Elrohir do not know better than anyone: they did not lose their mother at an early age (as they were past 20 years when she left.) Elrond, on the other hand, did. Strange misuse of canon, that.
sweet little aka kitsune-chan chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
aw that was so cute poor wittle estle though o well he is loved awesome fic koi
IwishSan chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
aw. this is really touching.

happy holidays to you and have a great new year.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
No offense, but you need to get a different beta. You had a lot of mistakes in this short piece and the formatting was strange.

'This was no different for the inhalants of Rivendell.' Inhalants are things you breathe in through your nose. I think you mean 'inhabitants'.

'it was his son's Elladan and Elrohir'...You don't need an apostrophe-'It was his sons'.

'senescing' sensing

Those are just a few examples. You also are in need of commas in several places as some of your sentences sound awkward without them.

It's a nice little one-shot, but again, the mistakes and formatting made it hard to read.