|Reviews for Strained Harmony|
| tatewaki2000 chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
*foams at mouth*
I am so happy... T_T
This chapter had me squirming in my seat. Such a wonderful story. You're such a brilliant Author.
| Rydan fall chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
When Michiru answers Ranma's telephone call, she has it about Ranma looking up Michiru, shouldn't that be Haruka?
| Mr Miliardo chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
GREAT! Another chapter! Now to find a tranquil moment to read it. :)
| AzaggThoth chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
What comparatively little interaction and actual plot I could find was nice but it was very hard to stomach sifting trough all the fashion and food porn to get to it.
| Poetheather1 chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
This was a wonderful chapter. You made some really nice insights into how Ranma was coping with all of this and the changes she had made to her life and appearance. Great stuff. And the proposal... very nice. I guess this means that Hotaru will start calling her Mama-Ranma now, which is very fitting. Setsuna-papa would also not be amiss.
I really do love this series and cherish each new chapter. Thank you.
| Dark Fiber chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
the lats two chapters have gone in a very different direction from the first 3. It reminds me of wheel of time, it starts awesome and then suddenly you have 500 page descriptions of pleated skirts except here we have paragraph after paragraph of nothing but the description of ranma putting on 500 lbs of weight.
There is really no Ranma character left at all, just a woman whose focus in the story is body weight.
now a marriage proposal? did we just go to lightspeed? I had to go back and reread a lot since I was just paging down through so much of chapter 5 having lost all interest.
Chapter 4 was very hmmmm.. chapter 5 was a large downward spiral for me to the point where I no longer have interest in chapter 6. I feel like the story has been lost, the characters have been lost. whats the main story arc now?
| ReindeerEmu chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
Wow this fic just keeps getting better. I really appreciate the amount of detail used in Ranma's descriptions it really paints a vivid picture. It also helps with the details of the clothes emphasizing how much more sophisticated Ranma now is with her peers and the subtle seduction Setsuna is weaving. Hurry and gimme more!
| HakanoSabishii chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
Very well done! I made quite an undignified sound when the alert for this update appeared in my inbox.
| Lord Anime chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
as always your work is well worth any wait for the next epic post. been following your work for years and always leads me to smile when you post.
| Tristan Ludlam chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
I was starting to enjoy this.
This chapter seems to just be a grind.
Hair do's, Cloths shopping, Dates, etc.
To be frank I skipped over a lot of the slice of life stuff done to the nth degree.
Let's see the next chapter
| Crimson Yrael chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
I'm currently torn on the direction of this story. While I really enjoy the overall plot and writing, there seems to be a massive over-emphasis on Ranma's (usually, though it is often the same for other characters, just not as frequent) appearance. I realize that it's a major part of the story, but the scenes tend to grind to a halt while every other paragraph is detailing what's happening with Ranma's hair, accessories, or clothes.
This would be far less noticeable if the other facets of the story were just as detailed. However, reading through the story, I often find myself at a loss as to what the scene itself is beyond a rather vague assumption based on the basic details given.
I'm still enjoying the story, but the above has been nagging at me for the past few chapters. I hope this criticism is constructive!
| gust chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
It was good I look forward to the next chapter
| ringlhach chapter 5 . 9/4/2014
I rather enjoyed the chapter and appreciate the update, but if you ever go back over and repost it, I'd pay some attention to the scene Ranma spends on the phone with Michiru. All of a sudden, toward the end, the perspective starts shifting. How does Michiru know Ranma set down her fork, or is smiling? That sort of stuff. At least, I'm pretty sure it was a phone and not one of those communicators.
| Shinkicker chapter 5 . 9/3/2014
Nice chapter, some fairly large progress here to which was good to , there was one part in the last 1/4 or 1/5th of the story that was a little confusingly worded but for the life of me I can't find it now. It was a confusion of tenses both present and past, iirc.
Thanks for posting!
| Jigoku no Yami chapter 5 . 9/3/2014
my god. This was just amazing. Sure, 50K in one chapter, but oh my god. the romance. the beauty, the pace...all of it is just sheer perfection. This...this i can say is the best story i have read in all my years of being on this site. please. keep writing. I want to read more.