|Reviews for Love Deeper|
| MyLilNeko chapter 2 . 13h
This is like the fourth time that I'm reading this story. Apologies for not reviewing. In my head I feel like a review shouldn't just be an "Oh you're such I good writer!", I think of it more of a count on the strong points of a story, or where it needs more attention. I think a review needs more constructive criticism, or at least that's what I think in my head all the time and I know for a fact that I can't give anyone much criticism that would in anyway be helpful. One thing that I notice every time I've read this chapter is how Naruto states that he's been betrayed before and I can't help but wonder how he was betrayed. A back story of what happen to Naruto or something would be nice, in like a side story to Love Deeper, because I just can't see how it could be added into this story after all the drama that's happened. I don't know how you would go about making it flow together. Of course I'm not much of a writer so I myself couldn't add it in without making ruining the story.
| infiresnation chapter 10 . 3/20
I really enjoyed reading this, it was so good I hope you continue it one day
| Sharlette Samaniego chapter 10 . 12/22/2016
hola, solo queria decirte que me ha gustado tu historia y pedirte que favor la continuaras para saber como termina... gracias por la historia y espero con ansias tu siguiente capitulo..[_]/
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/31/2016
Hello, i'm a fan of yours. All of your story is very good
Please continue this story cause i love it. You make a simple plot at first, than have it complicated till the end
And i have read "the wedding planner" as you told. That one is good too. Thank you
I'm waiting to read more SASUNARU story from you. Fighting!
| Kokoa Kirkland chapter 10 . 9/30/2016
I'm with Itachi about Sasuke is bad to decided to kill Karin and Suigetsu. He's the same as they.
Sorry for the broke english.
| annemaze chapter 10 . 9/18/2016
This is great!
I will wait for your update and maybe if you could come up with a book 2
Thank you for writing such great and passionate fanfic of my favorite dobe and teme...
| Arw165 chapter 10 . 7/23/2016
I was going to overlook this fic, since I thought I'd already read it on aff. What was my surprise, when I notice there are additional chapters here. I almost missed those. Unfortunately, story's still unfinished, but at least you updated the most of it.
Honestly, after the beginning I wasn't expecting drama like this in those last chapters (the shooting scene? I cannot imagine how Sasuke felt, when Naruto went LIMP in his arms, I had shivers). Because of those happy scenes about making Neji's and Gaara's lives miserable I let my guard down and wasn't prepared for things to get this serious so quick. Good job!
| ITalk2U chapter 10 . 6/26/2016
Very interesting story please update.
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/22/2016
That disclaimer... oh my god lmao
| shironeko-hime chapter 10 . 6/18/2016
Please update. It has been 5 years.. :( i really love the story. And i hope that they will have a happy ending... :)
| LBH-don't give up chapter 10 . 6/10/2016
Please please please please please continou this story. It feels so good. It is may be even to realistic. Of course there are some little things that i don't like, but you can't write perfect story because there will always be someone that doesn't like something in your story. Anyway, this story is realy good and very interesting. I like it. Soooooo could you please continou it? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeee
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 10 . 5/1/2016
If there's a change this would continue... i hope they get their happy ending.
This fic is DARK AU but lighter... XD
Unexpected. but still fantastically great!
I'm glad Naruto didn't leave Sasuke after his murder confession.
| SD3322 chapter 10 . 4/3/2016
I love this story, looking forward for the next one._
| Why0Am0i0Here chapter 7 . 3/29/2016
CALL AN AMBULANCE SAKURA HAS BEEN SEVERALLY BURNED AND DEPRESSED BY SASUKE BUT WELL LET HIM OF THE HOOK
| Why0Am0i0Here chapter 6 . 3/29/2016
Sasuke your training him so well I'm so proud of you (wipes away anime tear)