|Reviews for Who Said All Endings Are Happy|
| Kai Kai chapter 3 . 10/5/2008
While your writing style is decent, I must let you know that you have created a Mary-Sue (come on- brilliant, talented, political power, a demon, special ring, blah blah blah etc)
Also, the characters are out of character. Kurama is much more confident and less expressive than you make him, and for a high level demon who doesn't put up with anything, Hiei would never be bossed around by a bunch of maids. But maybe that was your attempt at humor...
PS- actual fan girls is a sign of a real amateur writer
| bloodstainedlove chapter 3 . 5/5/2007
God its been a long time since weve writen.
| zzxX-Rei-Xxzz chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
W00T! go sheer! update soon? pwease? lol Great story by the way!
| Hiei's girl 06 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
I like it update soon