|Reviews for Christmas in Wisconsin|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
Heh heh heh heh... :3 You did absolutely wonderful on this. It had me smirking almost all the way through the story. You're quite the rhymer, though. It'd take quite a while for me to come up with something like that. To you, I raise my hat! ;] Heh heh, jokes aside, you should totally do another GW story sometime. I'm sure it'll be great! :D
| Linzerj chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Haha, oh Ghostwriter how I love the fact that you can sense the author herself. (breaking the fourth wall for the win!)
The rhyme and meter was fine - the few slant rhymes and eye rhymes thrown in made it fun to read, as did the varying meter length. All in all it was hilarious and quite enjoyable!
| kingpariah chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
your rhyming was amazing. poor vlad *laughs* no wonder he got a cat.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
*points and laughs at Vlad* So that was the final straw for his actually getting that evil little cat.
| seantriana chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
This one is crazy fun to read! And it rhymed-indeed!
.. I think I just got infected...
| TTCyclone chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
| HermyStar chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Awesome job! I loved it, I really did!
| Niori chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
This is hilarious! I love it!
| WhoIsTheDoctor chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
good job on the rhyming bit. haha, poor vlad, hegot a marysue!
| MoonlightUmbreon chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Someone tell me why, why, WHY I did not find this earlier! The whole Mary Sue thing got me giggling.
As a side note, when I see things like this or The Fright Before Christmas, I don't think in rhyme, but for some reason my head copies /how/ the sentences are said. :P
Great job, I can't rhyme to save my life. It takes me an hour to do about eight or nine lines.
| grimAuxiliatrix chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
When the poem had finished, I was very confused
'Why isn't he rhyming?' I thought, bemused.
For after reading that epitaph
My mind was aflutter with such a seraphic
prose, and discomfit was I till the story had stopped
and poetic mindset all but forgot.
Hahaha. Oh, man, I couldn't stop thinking in rhyme when Ghostwriter's poem was over. I kept reading haltingly and expecting the next sentence to rhyme. I actually read the poem out loud to myself, it was so great. You should get someone to draw it out for you.
Nothing rhymes well with "epitaph" or "poem". /
| unposh brit chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
GAH now youve gotten me thinking in rhyme.
That was a great poem, i'm sure it was fun to write, though I'd have a chore thinking up as many different lines.
Apparently friggen Mary Sue even worms her way into even the best stories.
Great story and good goin with your other stories!
| Nonamei Midnight chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
*Snicker* I knew Ghostwriter wasn't a real bad guy...And I'll bet he'd be interesting to have as an ally...Wait...*Mutter* Fine. "Showtime" here I come...
| Tempest86 chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
Very nice job! Happy Holidays!
| dizappearingirl chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
HA HA HA HA! I LOVE this, tis amazing! Great poem and wonderful story. SO GOOD! OH, and I totally understand that feeling you get after writing a poem that rhymes that you keep thinking in rhyme as well! Just reading that poem made me think in rhyme! (Twill last me for quite some time! ha ha...) I think this is the best story I've read with the Ghostwriter in it! (I love the comment at the end when refering to you!) _ I applaud.