Reviews for Ranma, can I sleep with you ?
giby-chan chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
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Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
And an author makes Akane scared of !
Consider perhaps trying it with someone else.
EG:Has anyone made Ranma scared of anything (apart from cats)yet?
Just consider it.
Anthony1l chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
riya chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
awesome story...
kate chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
He "lied" down on his father's futon and watched her as she put his own futon very close to him. He blushed, and as she put the covers over herself he turned away. They were now both looking in different directions. Ranma facing the wall and Akane facing the window. She turned towards him and he guessed that she must have seen something scary. She spoke to his back.

its not lied- thats the past tense for lie as in liar

it should be "lay"
bluewitch chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
sweet and cute
Baron Hausenpheffer chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
Heh, heh. Nice job; this was well-written, sweet, and mostly in-character. Also, don't worry about grammar; you're doing much better than most native-English-speakers on this site (which says a lot for you and not much for us, LOL).

Again, good job! :)
Ranmano1fan chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
A cute little fanfic, I really enjoyed it.
Lana Atkins chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Your English seems perfect to me.

I loved this story. It was short and cute. It's going on my Favourite Stories list.:]
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Short and cute indeed . The writing style is really simple compared to your other stories. But then again, it's a great job for a first english fic.
Anime's-mistress chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
I did like your story and it was definitely short and sweet. Great job. C:
Angleico3156789 chapter 1 . 2/16/2007

such a cute story
Savie chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
haha that was cute, you should add on ]
Krimzonrayne chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Ah so cute; I love this :). I hate how some people are making Akane acts like a complete nutter now, she's actually more like this, the romantic and emotionally vulnerable girl... captured the characters really well, you know :)

I really think you're ready for something bigger!

some really small points

I’ll go in
LilikoMizu chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
o0o0o so so sweet!
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