|Reviews for Amazon Daughter|
| ObsessedwithBirds chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Aww I love it,, very descriptive.
P.S. lesser kestrels are some of my favourite birds :D
| Aviva chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Notes(in order): Please send answers to:
Halcyone is actually Halycone. You switched the c and y.
What color is russet?
Put a comma after 'golden side of the mare, set off into...' in paragraph 5.
Never mind the editing notes. I would like to beta the story, if you don't mind. I am a straight 'A' student and the best editor in my class.
| Igi chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
Wow. All I can say is wow. Brilliant, it really takes you into its world.
| Big Cat chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Very good, very interesting, I enjoyed a lot while reading. Please go on. I want to know what happens next with Helkyone. Let me know when you post your next chapter. I am not usual reader of this part of FF.