|Reviews for Gray|
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
short and sweet and it cuts straight to the heart of the matter. congrats - you got fave story in about ten sentences.
| Laura chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
This is really good, even though it's very short. Good job.
| Me chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
THis doesn't seem like a story. Way too short. But anyway. Nice. Better to be descriptive in a short paragraph then boring in 100 paragraphs.
Maybe you should make each sentence on a different line for a more dramatic look.
| rose chapter 1 . 12/19/2006