Reviews for Bloodline kinjutsu
He Who Rules With an Iron Hoof chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
uhh so he was related to someone who had the sharingan way back?

what was the effect of the screwed up seal? and theres no dna from a bruise... bruises are caused when you get hit and mini bloodvessels under ur skin pops and then the blood dies and turns brownish blue
Forsaken chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Wahoo! Naruto got the Sharingan, earlier then Sasuke even. Take that Sasuke-teme. NarutoXfemKyuubi. Make it so that he accidentally combined the two bloodline jutsu. So he'll get the bloodlines of his ancestors and can steal other bloodline even though that wasn't his original intention. Good luck I expect great things from this fic.
firareth5 chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
an interesting start, hopefully you have naruto beating the shit out of sasuke at every turn with a good dose of sakura and kakashi bashing thrown in also. update soon!
Kage chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
This is getting interseting, please update as soon as possible, I wish to read more of it. Also, could you make it just a tad longer?
T.O.B chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
well, that was interesting

naruto having the sharigan, not surprised

i think naruto should have a harem

because i think he deserves one

and if i had to chose on who to be in the harem:hinata,tenten,female haku, and maybe anko, and maybe just maybe u could turn kimimaru into a girl, or a sister of his that surpisingly survived the clan wars


hinata has love naurto since the academy or before that

tenten is almost naruto's opposite will he is not good with weapons she is a mitress, plus i think hey could be a good couple

and female haku, i believe she should have someone in her life, plus she is juts like naruto

anko and naruto have the same personality

and for kimi, it would be interesting

how will things change if naruto gets the sharigan

will he taugh the chidori, just wondering

sasuke will be so pissed knowing that the 'dope' has his family bloodline

Demonkid chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
kool, keep it up... not very oroginal but hey almost none are, anymore so lets see ur take on a super naruto...
storynerd chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
good story! i hope you update soon!
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