i love the story but i have a question i have a idea for a story but im going to be away for a month an you write it for me its about narutofinding a special jutsu in the scrol that like in the first chapter of this story uses a jutsu that looks at all of his ancestors and it turns out he is related to the sage of six paths gaing a super bloodline similar to the sharingan the rinnegan and the bykugan put togetor and the ultimate body like superman fused with goku type of body and control over the elemnts along with none of the side effects like no blind looking eyes(huyaaga) no black eyes (uchia) and no purple eyes(pain)but he eventually gets controlover elemnts since the elements healhim at a place whith all the elments are active ya that means theres a huge gravity puul a huge pool of water storm thw works so thoughts

awesome story

Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon.

hm it ok so far.

did naruto become a nin

i kind hope not!

Nice. I'm glad haku didn't die and that Saku... no forehead girl was kicked out of the team and that Haku joined them and the family. I hope that you will continue with such stories. Thank you for reading this comment. Please inform me when the new chapter starts.

ur puttin her with anko arent u? shes prety insane. and she has bipolar personality.

is ther evr going to be a chance that naruto will evr use the sexy harem no jutsu at kakashi?

The whole Elemental Clones are really confusing.

And how did Naruto get the sharingan anyways? This is really dumb

great story caint wait to see what happens next! untill next time lil toon

sweet!

ANKO!

the one where all u can think about is a boy!

please update soon

good job

This fic is...different. I like it though so update soon. This concept is both interesting and frustrating at the same time. I find my mind full of questions about what's to come and find myself anxious to know at the same time.

LOL!

Love this story, I hope you update soon. I will guess Sakura's instructor is anko